Lois & Clark Fanfic Message Boards

Register Log In

Lois & Clark Forums Forums Fan Fiction Lois & Clark Fanfic FDK-The Longest Road: The Roads They Walked Alone - Part 3

Print Thread

FDK-The Longest Road: The Roads They Walked Alone - Part 3 #6977 10/11/03 11:02 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,217 Exiled to Mare Nostrum coast daneel OP Kerth
OP daneel Kerth Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,217 Exiled to Mare Nostrum coast	It's interesting the relationship between Ching and Zara. I'm curious to see how are they going to solve the problems Jose "Practice up your shielding spells...and remember to duck if you see green light coming your way." Harry Potter to Wizengamot in OotP trial A Bad Week in the Wizengamot

Re: FDK-The Longest Road: The Roads They Walked Alone - Part 3 #6978 10/12/03 12:12 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,992 Sydney Australia T TriciaW Pulitzer
TriciaW Pulitzer T Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,992 Sydney Australia	Rac A fantastic part! Your characterizations are spot on. And poor Lois! I'm glad she has the support of Martha and Jonathan. I'm looking forward to reading the next part. Tricia

Re: FDK-The Longest Road: The Roads They Walked Alone - Part 3 #6979 10/12/03 03:22 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 767 usa merry Features Writer
merry Features Writer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 767 usa	Rac, As expected another great part more merry

Re: FDK-The Longest Road: The Roads They Walked Alone - Part 3 #6980 10/12/03 09:08 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico mariadferdez. Pulitzer
mariadferdez. Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico	Hi, Great part. Quote "Our relationship is not a romantic one, but it must be an intimate one," Zara clarified, but not really. "You will have to trust me, as much as you've ever trusted anyone and I will have to do the same. You will be asked to place your life in my hands, to trust the fate of New Krypton and its people to my judgment and I will do the same. To the world, we must always appear as of one mind. Despite any disagreements we may have, we will always have to stand united. The fate of one of us is the fate of both of us. There can be no pretenses between us, no formalities. We are far beyond decorum. In public, we owe one another complete loyalty, in private, complete candor." Well, Ching should take Clark place in that department. More soon, please. MAF Maria D. Ferdez. --- Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age. MAF

Re: FDK-The Longest Road: The Roads They Walked Alone - Part 3 #6981 10/12/03 12:36 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,047 NJ Supes1fan Top Banana
Supes1fan Top Banana Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,047 NJ	Hey Rac, you are definately keeping this story interesting and compelling. Poor Lois having to deal with her parents, luckily she has the Kents to keep her sane! The Ching, Zara and Clark triangle is taut with resentment and frustration..I can't wait to see what happens on New Krypton. Keep up the great work! ~Liz Lois: Can I go? Clark: No. Lois: Oh come on, Clark, why do we go through this? We both know I’m going to go. Clark: Then why do you ask? Lois: I’m trying to be nice.

Re: FDK-The Longest Road: The Roads They Walked Alone - Part 3 #6982 10/14/03 12:25 PM
Joined: May 2003 Posts: 515 The Big Apple R Rac Columnist
Rac Columnist R Joined: May 2003 Posts: 515 The Big Apple	Hi everyone, Thanks for your comments. I'm very glad to see that the tension among Zara, Clark, and Ching is believable. Even if I can't make people like Ching, I at least want them to understand his motivations and not think of him as a completely worthless character I'm also glad to see that the parts with Lois and Martha worked. I always liked the conversation between Martha and Jonathan in ATAI where they refer to when Jonathan told Mrs. Clark to 'stuff a sock in it' and I'd always wanted to incorporate the story behind that into a fic. More will be coming soon. Rac

Moderated by Kaylle, SuperBek

Link Copied to Clipboard

Powered by UBB.threads™ PHP Forum Software 7.7.5