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Any thoughts? Anyone still out there?

I wondering when we would get more of this story! Good character descriptions. Looking forward to seeing where we go from here.

Hey, it's back!

I like the two parallel narrations. It works for the story. Gives the feeling like on TV.

Is that guy from House, or a cameo from That '70s Show?

Michael

There are still people reading this!

cookiesmom - Thanks! I wanted to make sure people who haven't seen House would have a good picture of the other characters.

Darth Michael - I'm glad you said that! I was concerned that the scene switching wouldn't work as well in written form, but that's exactly what I was going for. And Dr. Eric Foreman is a House character...I've never seen That '70s Show.

Thanks for reading!
Amber

I'm still here too, Amber. I liked this chapter, although I thought it was a bit short. Maybe it just seemed that way because of the dual narratives and my own proclivity for writing novel-sized chapters.

It seems to me that Foreman, being a neurologist, would be very interested in Adam's aphasia. It's a shame Wilson hasn't shown up yet - in his own way, he's as needy as House is. And when will Cutty pop in, or are you planning to limit this to House's team?

More soon! I like seeing Greg and Lois lock horns and bellow for dominance in the herd. She just might be his match in snarky insightfulness.

Oh you've no idea how much I squee'd when I finally saw that this part was up!

...and how sad I was when I finished and didn't have any more.

Will part 5 be up soon?

Hey look, more FDK!

Terry - This might have been a bit short due to the scene shifting, sorry! This was the best place to stop, though. Wilson and Cuddy...whether or not they make it into the story remains to be seen. I agree, though. Wilson is an interesting foil for House.

Queenie - Hi! Glad you were happy to see this! Part 5 is written and beta'ed, but that's all I have...so I can post it, but then there's no telling when 6 will be up...

Thanks everybody!
Amber

I'm so sorry I haven't given any FDK since this part.

I'll try to make up for it bit by bit.

I really like how you picture House, charming as ever and I'm sure he has figured out by now that Clark is Superman.