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Comments? Suggestions? Final overall opinions?

Thanks for reading the story. Hope you enjoyed it.

Jude

Wow! I loved the story. It was very different from many things I've read. Great job!

I loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
keep it coming!

Jude, I hate that it's over.

This was such a great read. I can't say thank you enough for posting it nightly, too.

I adored your Clark laying "seige to the fortress" that is Lois Lane. Love how he spoke his mind. The "I can be patient, and I expect to live a long time." He got right to the heart of the matter, rather than dancing around it. Such a nice change! And completely believable with the "take a chance, Lois."

Also, just enjoyed your Lex Luthor throughout. He was spot on. Just the right combo of chilling and nasty and suave. I particulary liked the "Spoken with your usual perception" dig at Lois.

The flying revelation. So great. Romantic and a beautiful image.

This wrapped up so nicely, Jude. And I see in your notes that you post only once a year. Are you certain you wouldn't want to make that a bi-annual event, atleast?

Now that I've finished this, I'll be renting 'Laura.'

Thanks again, Jude, loved it,

CC

Never saw the movie but enjoyed the story nonetheless.

Nicely draw and well executed. A slightly different Lois and Clark from what we are used to be still quite recognizable and a pair we want to root for.

Well done.

Tank (who thinks that Jude can post stories whenever she wants... how about starting a new one tomorrow?)

Thank you so much, Ngoire, Roo, CC and Tank for your comments. CC, enjoy the movie. Let me know what you think about it. Tank, I'm not quite finished with tweaking this story, yet. Then I have to wait for the muse to strike again. Thanks for asking, though.

until later everyone.

Jude

Loved the flying revelation, Jude, loved the whole story. Thank you for a wonderful read!

I remember 'Laura' was one of my mother's favorite movies. She adored Gene Tierney. I never saw it myself though, so if I find it at my local rental store I'll take it home with me.

Jude!!!

Bob