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My thanks again to my BRs, Female Hawk (Corrina), Iolanthe, and Sue S. for their words of encouragement and improvement. You're the best! :-)
If you notice a lot of similarities between Clark's Card (posted yesterday) and Lois's Card, that is at least somewhat deliberate...Keep in mind that even before a year of marriage, the two were able to complete each other's sentences. As different as they are in a lot of ways, they can definitely think alike when they want to.
As always, feedback welcomed.
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Ahh, that was sweet (again  ) Definitely loved this card as well - and my favourite line was the "my own personal Peter Pan".
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Wonderful!  Artemis
History is easy once you've lived it. - Duncan MacLeod
Writing history is easy once you've lived it. - Artemis
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Yes, very sweet. Clark as Lois's personal Peter Pan, that's adorable. ![[Linked Image]](http://www.fluvium.org/imagenes/ElSecretodelasHadas.jpg) Ann
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Really nice to see her side of this. Very sweet. Laura
Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”
Caroline's "Stardust"
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Wonderful! 
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DW and Ann, Glad you enjoyed it. :-) And I'm relieved to see that Peter Pan worked for you both. I liked the idea myself, but I wasn't sure how it would "fly" with others. Artemis, Laura, and Evelyn, thanks for the feedback. It's a large part of what makes the effort of writing worth it. Joy, Lynn
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Sayo@Lynn: This is so nice! T_T Aki (who can't be bothered to make an account): Good work. 
Just got married (21st June 2010).
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Hi Sayo and Aki, Thanks for the feedback. And Sayo, if Aki hasn't already said this...If he has to write something like Clark's Card for you, then you have to write something like Lois's Card for him! It's only fair, after all...  Joy, Lynn
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