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#72314 06/18/10 11:52 AM
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Any final thoughts and comments go here. And thanks for reading!

- Alisha smile

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Loved it!!

All 3 parts were terrific. Especially loved the last part with Lois & Clark discussing the Mayson-thing thumbsup cool


If she had to move heaven and Earth, perhaps come back to haunt Perry and explain the story after they'd killed her, she would do it.

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#72316 06/19/10 05:24 PM
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That was great. And cute! Good work.
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#72317 06/19/10 08:51 PM
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“No.” She paused slightly then pressed her body up against his. “But my bed is.”
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“Because I’m going to ask Lois out.”

“She might not say yes.”
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“I mean... would you like to go on a date sometime?”
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She looked back at the road as the car in front began to move, feeling the start of a smile on her face. “Yeah, why not. Sometime.”
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Loved all three parts and the ending to part 3 was excellent and fun smile

Especially liked that Clark went back and told Mayson he never had intentions to go out with her or to join her on the weekend away!

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Thanks for the comments, guys! smile1 I'm glad you all enjoyed it.

- Alisha

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Glad that you accelerated several things:

1) Clark dumping Mayson definitively
2) Lois and Clark in bed together

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Hmmm, I wasn't too happy about part one of this trilogy (because of Lois's utter stupidity there, of course), so I decided not to read the other two parts. But then I couldn't help looking at the feedback thread here, and boy! Did I realize I was missing out on something!

So I read it and enjoyed myself so much! I have to agree with Iolan: I loved seeing Clark really dump Mayson, and of course I loved Lois and Clark spending the night together in a non-platonic way! laugh blush

I also really liked the scenes at the Daily Planet, where Jimmy was driving Lois crazy with his talk about Clark and Mayson, and Lois trying to protect Clark's secret without playing along with Jimmy's assumption about Clark and Mayson. I also loved it when Lois refused to call Mayson in order to help Clark. First he had to call Perry and say that he was sick, before Mayson could be a part of this as far as Lois was concerned! laugh

I also liked that Lois wasn't ready to assume the role of Clark's girlfriend just yet. But of course, it won't take long until she is! laugh

What an enjoyable read, Alisha!

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#72322 06/21/10 06:12 AM
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Thanks Iolan. Ann, I'm glad you decided to come back and give the story another chance. dance

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