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Hi, Great part. "It is good to see you, too," she replied. She stepped back. "I'm sorry, I forget myself. Kal El, this is my father, Tek Ra."
Clark bowed deeply and respectfully. Tek Ra bowed in response. "I am very pleased to meet you, sir," Clark said.
"And I am honored to meet you at last, Kal El, son of Jor El and Lara. My thanks to you for responding to our request. Though I knew that if you were a man like your father, you would not deny us your assistance." Is this Jor-El best friend? Does he knows about the attempt to baby Kal-El? More soon, please. MAF
Maria D. Ferdez. --- Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age. MAF
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Great stuff, great stuff! This story has me TOTALLY hooked..I love reading about the NK intrigue and when Lois heard the heartbeat..oh! ~Liz
Lois: Can I go? Clark: No. Lois: Oh come on, Clark, why do we go through this? We both know I’m going to go. Clark: Then why do you ask? Lois: I’m trying to be nice.
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Rac Another excellent part! And poor Lois, on top of everything she can hear the gossip at the coffee machine. I like the way Ching defends Clark. What has Nor got planned? I can't wait to see what happens next. Tricia
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Without the sounds of her own typing to fill the air, the other sounds of the newsroom managed to work their way to the forefront. In the background she could hear a copy machine in the copy room as it rattled off page after page. The coffee machine whirred and hissed almost silently on the other end of the bullpen. Reporters and editors yelled back and forth as eight different conversations unfolded simultaneously. A dozen people having more luck than she with the writing process typed like maniacs on their keyboards, filling the bullpen with the clattering of plastic keyboard keys.
Over the din of the newsroom, her computer's hard drive whirred, as though patiently waiting for her to give it something to do, to make it part of the magical process of crafting an award winning article. Fat chance. Lois's fingers were not busy typing. They hovered over the keys, waiting for inspiration. She closed her eyes and tried to block out the million and one distractions that the newsroom afforded its staff during any given moment in the workday.
A soft sound intruded upon her ruminations. It didn't quite sound like the computer fan, or at least it didn't sound like the computer fan did when it was working properly. The computer wasn't subtly trying to tell her that it was on the verge of crashing was it? She strained to listen to it, distilling it out from all the other sounds in the newsroom, willing the rest of the newsroom to go quiet.
There it was: fluttering, faint but unmistakable, and certainly not imagined. She'd been listening for that sound for weeks now. And there it was, as if it had always been there, waiting for her to hear it. Tears immediately formed in her eyes and soon threatened to spill. She tried to move or speak, but could do neither. Lois was struck dumb. As far as she was concerned, the whole world had come to a grinding halt and there was nothing left in it save that miraculous, whisper soft sound. Wow!!!
"Practice up your shielding spells...and remember to duck if you see green light coming your way." Harry Potter to Wizengamot in OotP trial A Bad Week in the Wizengamot
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AHHH hurry we need B plot! Althought the A plot is good so far. I want them to see each other already<g> Laura
Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”
Caroline's "Stardust"
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Tomatoes? Rac, no way - this is terrific stuff! Kill Nor! Like everyone else, I loved when Lois recognized the sound of the baby's heartbeat for the first time. Lovely moment! Eagerly waiting for more... Kathy
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As usual, great stuff Rac ditto others more merry
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Hi Everyone,
Thanks for your comments. Laura, I'm afraid that as the title suggests, LnC will find themselves apart and dealing with a great deal alone. Maria, Liz, and Tricia, more Kryptonian intrigue to follow. It's a relief to know that this war on NK stuff is keeping people's attention. Kathy and Jose, I'm very glad that you liked the heartbeat scene; I thought it would be a nice twist on the fanfic canon of Clark hearing the heartbeat. Merry, more soon, I promise!
Thanks again everyone!
Rac
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I'm afraid that as the title suggests, LnC will find themselves apart and dealing with a great deal alone. Okay, okay - we'll curb our patience, Rac. As long as you add a lot of smoochies in the end. Poor Lois - not being able to share this awesome news with Clark.
Lois: Well, I like my quirks. I think they make me unique. Clark: You certainly are unique.
Clark: You're high maintenance, you know that? Lois: But I'm worth it!
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