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FDK Congo 2/6? #72841 07/21/10 12:20 PM
Joined: Jun 2010 Posts: 1,200 Boston, MA mozartmaid OP Top Banana
OP mozartmaid Top Banana Joined: Jun 2010 Posts: 1,200 Boston, MA	Yeah, I stole a line from the first Superman movie, so sue me. ("You've got me? Who's got you?" Anyway, hope you like it! Reach for the moon, for even if you fail, you'll still land among the stars... and who knows? Maybe you'll meet Superman along the way.

Re: FDK Congo 2/6? #72842 07/21/10 01:09 PM
Joined: Feb 2010 Posts: 4,425 Likes: 1 Delaware L Lynn S. M. Pulitzer
Lynn S. M. Pulitzer L Joined: Feb 2010 Posts: 4,425 Likes: 1 Delaware	What fun! I like your rapid but clearly labelled changes in POV. They work well in your story. Quote She had done it. She was definitely in trouble. I also like how both Lois and Clark thought this. They hadn't even met and already they were thinking alike! Quote Couldn't blurt out the fact that they were soul mates and meant to be together. Couldn't blurt out that HG Wells had helped him go back in time to find her. Couldn't blurt out that there was another dimension out there, with another Lois and Clark who were just as amazing as they were. Gee, you think that all of that might scare Lois? She'd probably think Clark crazier than Papa Ludu. Joy, Lynn

Re: FDK Congo 2/6? #72843 07/21/10 04:16 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 4,058 NY Laurach Pulitzer
Laurach Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 4,058 NY	Yay Clark. Looking forward to what is next. Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?” Caroline's "Stardust"

Re: FDK Congo 2/6? #72844 07/22/10 01:41 AM
Joined: May 2009 Posts: 746 South Africa D DW Columnist
DW Columnist D Joined: May 2009 Posts: 746 South Africa	Interesting premise - I am looking forward to see where you go with this!

Re: FDK Congo 2/6? #72845 07/22/10 03:13 PM
Joined: Feb 2008 Posts: 2,823 IolantheAlias Pulitzer
IolantheAlias Pulitzer Joined: Feb 2008 Posts: 2,823	The "saving Lois from the bad guys" was just too easy. What's going to go wrong next? Lois's life just can't be that simple.

Re: FDK Congo 2/6? #72846 07/22/10 04:09 PM
Joined: Jun 2010 Posts: 1,200 Boston, MA mozartmaid OP Top Banana
OP mozartmaid Top Banana Joined: Jun 2010 Posts: 1,200 Boston, MA	Quote Originally posted by IolantheAlias: The "saving Lois from the bad guys" was just too easy. What's going to go wrong next? Lois's life just can't be that simple. All I'll say is, only 'time' will tell... Reach for the moon, for even if you fail, you'll still land among the stars... and who knows? Maybe you'll meet Superman along the way.

Re: FDK Congo 2/6? #72847 07/23/10 08:20 AM
Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 9,066 Likes: 31 Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner
Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 9,066 Likes: 31	This had just the right amount of creepy-ness. Looking forward to finding out what else you got in store for us with parts 3ff! Michael Join us on the #loisclark Discord server! We talk about fanfic, our favorite show, life, and more! (It’s almost like the IRC days of old again!) I go by Michael on the Archives.

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