Agreed, nothing particularly earth shattering. Actually, I enjoyed te progress. Early on, I noticed this section:
"Well, we know that already. Did you tell him we suspect Lex?"
He smiled at her use of 'we.' His partner was back.
This is a nice little part that shows how much has changed in the direction of the story. Lois may be engaged to Lex, but she is with Clark.
I liked your descriptions of Lois trying to fit in at LNN. I had to wonder at this section:
The closest she got to what people really thought of Lex was when she talked to an errand girl, who had just started working there a month before.
"Mr. Luthor?" She shivered. "Well, better you marry him than me. I don't care how much money the man has, that man gives me the creeps."
I have to believe that this girl is very foolish. At the very least her opinion could cost her that job. She must not have realized who Lois was. Under normal circumstances you would never criticize the boss in front of his soon-to-be wife.
As for Lois and LNN in the series, I don't think she was really happy. I always thought she was not letting herself accept how unhappy she was. As you say, this was part of her working hard to convince herself that her new future with Lex really was what she wanted. She was in denial and it would never have worked out.
Bob