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FDK - Gawain and the Black Knight (23/38) #74606 10/16/10 09:07 PM
Joined: Feb 2010 Posts: 342 Arkansas D Deja Vu OP Beat Reporter
OP Deja Vu Beat Reporter D Joined: Feb 2010 Posts: 342 Arkansas	You know, I don't think Clarkent and Gawain make very good nibblies... :p EDIT: Forgot to mention--next chapter is called "At Full Tilt."

Re: FDK - Gawain and the Black Knight (23/38) #74607 10/17/10 12:47 AM
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Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 9,066 Likes: 31	Michael Join us on the #loisclark Discord server! We talk about fanfic, our favorite show, life, and more! (It’s almost like the IRC days of old again!) I go by Michael on the Archives.

Re: FDK - Gawain and the Black Knight (23/38) #74608 10/17/10 10:57 AM
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DW Columnist D Joined: May 2009 Posts: 746 South Africa	This is actually one of my favourite parts of the whole story (and I really want to say more, but don't want to give anything away ...)

Re: FDK - Gawain and the Black Knight (23/38) #74609 10/17/10 05:35 PM
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OP Deja Vu Beat Reporter D Joined: Feb 2010 Posts: 342 Arkansas	Thanks for the feedback! Deja ------------------------------------ Michael-- Quote Hmm... I don't know, they remind me of Double-Fudge-Crunch Bars for Ogres. They sound like great fun, but once you have too many of them... Hahahah. They're also painful--just not to teeth. Quote Gawain's sure hugging other boys a lot for a boy. Wonder if that means he's into boys rather than girls Hahaha. Does make you wonder, doesn't it? :p Quote You know, if it hadn't been obvious before, this one would now be the Las-Vegas-sized neon arrow pointing to the Superman lore. LOL. Las-Vegas-sized? Really? As for the Barbarian Kingdom, Gawain says in chapter 6, "Maybe a century ago, the Barbarian Kingdom was once united with Metropolita. They made up a kingdom called Solaria. They broke apart, but eventually they reached a truce and stopped warring. In the past decade or so, though, the Barbarian Kingdom started the war with Metropolita again." Quote Way better than jewelry. Well, except for a little solitaire Hahaha. :p Quote They ate the previous owners. I'm guessing that makes it OK. But they didn't slay the dragon. Heh. The didn't slay the ogres either. :p And a dragon angry with a kingdom is way scarier than a group of ogres. Quote And what happened to little Draco? Did he and the Princess become friends? He went back to his cave mumbling about stupid humans. DW-- Quote This is actually one of my favourite parts of the whole story (and I really want to say more, but don't want to give anything away ...) Hahaha. It's hard to give feedback when you already know what happens every step of the way, eh?

Re: FDK - Gawain and the Black Knight (23/38) #74610 10/17/10 11:28 PM
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DW Columnist D Joined: May 2009 Posts: 746 South Africa	Quote Hahaha. It's hard to give feedback when you already know what happens every step of the way, eh? That is why why I have stayed away and probably will continue to do so until the end

Re: FDK - Gawain and the Black Knight (23/38) #74611 10/18/10 07:47 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,597 Indiana KathyB Merriwether
KathyB Merriwether Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,597 Indiana	Catching up on two parts at once. Whee! Quote A minute later, Gawain rushed over to him. “Clarkent! You have to see this! There’s this hen over there laying eggs that are--” LOL, when you mentioned the golden harp, I wondered, then this sent me over the edge. Too funny. I love all the fairy tale references being tossed about in this story. Quote A golden square was inlaid with a blood-red ruby, and on top of the gem was a magnificent flying horse. The creature’s wings were stretched out, its legs lifted in perpetual flight as its tail swayed in an invisible wind. Ooooo! Yes, the perfect gift! I wonder, though, after all the problems with the dragon, did neither Clarkent nor Loisette think that stealing treasure might be a bad thing? Quote “Oh, niiiibblies,” the third speaker continued. Suddenly, a massive form appeared in front of them. “Ha!” Quote “We almost died,” Clarkent panted, his heart still racing a million miles a minute. “I know,” Gawain said with a wide grin. “Wasn’t it fun?” Snork. Yeah, there's our Lois. Kathy

Re: FDK - Gawain and the Black Knight (23/38) #74612 10/18/10 03:07 PM
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OP Deja Vu Beat Reporter D Joined: Feb 2010 Posts: 342 Arkansas	Kathy-- Woo for catchup! Quote LOL, when you mentioned the golden harp, I wondered, then this sent me over the edge. Too funny. I love all the fairy tale references being tossed about in this story. Mwahaha. Glad you caught it! Did you also catch the hint of "Goldilocks and the Three Bears" with the necklace bit? I tried to have both some more obvious and more subtle references to fairytales, and I am happy you enjoy it! I had a lot of fun with that part! I went to Wikipedia and looked at their list of fairytales, and then I tried to see which of the more well-known ones I could incorporate in big or small ways! Quote I wonder, though, after all the problems with the dragon, did neither Clarkent nor Loisette think that stealing treasure might be a bad thing? Hahaha. Well, ogres aren't nearly as terrifying as dragons. Thanks for the feedback! Deja

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