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Good morning (or evening, if that's when you're reading this)!

Artemis - Thank you for the clarification! I was worried I had botched it by having her discount a sea van so quickly. Whew!

Don't worry, Clark clearly remembers all the times he almost told her. And - either through his eyes or hers - you'll get to be frustrated right along with him.

BJ - No shame! I know you're busy! Thank you for spotlighting one of my favorite things about Lois - that she can't leave well enough alone.

Jen - OMG! I'm so sorry! I hope you wanted to move anyway.

Michael - What has happened to your muse?

I'm still waiting for one beta. I'll give her until this afternoon and then I'll post either way. My heartfelt thanks to everyone who has replied. Your feedback is the only payment I get for all the time I squander writing fic when I should really be doing RL stuff. Thank you!

So, there was something up there about maybe Sunday, and I have been clicking that old "refresh" button ever since. Unfortunately, I wasn't in a position to nag, because <ahem> it seems I never got around to writing you a single line of feedback, even after three chapters! All I could do was suffer in silence, hoping you'd post.

Until just now. Yippee! Sue posted!
Yes, I remember that line from the night before. <going back to check exactly what it was>:
I wonder, was he really planning on blurting it out just like that? We may never know, since Lois never let him finish.

Bad enough to refuse his offer to spend the weekend in Smallville, but then there was this:
Ouch.

And now, Lois is in some sort of metal container with light shining through the (wooden) *floor*?

More, please!

Vicki - OMG! Vicki! You have no idea how much I've despaired the past week or so, wondering if you were still reading and torturing myself that, if you were reading, it obviously wasn't all that good. I'm so happy and relieved!

I laughed at your method of skimming to the flashbacks and then going back to read the whole thing. Truthfully, I would do the same thing. Plot schmot, just give me the WAFFY bits.

Now that you've posted, how can I hold out on you?

As if.

I am indeed still reading. You have no idea how happy it made me to see you were posting a new story. You *know* I love reading your work.

800# for information on Superman? Yep. Someone's kidnapped Lois to earn that money. Sigh. Poor Lois. Of course, why would they take her so far away that he couldn't hear her screaming until she was hoarse. Unless they were testing his hearing. And knew that her voice was most likely to be the one to get his attention.

I know. It's Batman! Oh, that darn caped crusader! Ok. That was out of left field. Back to the story...