Nice to see a new update.
Loved this line:
Fury colored Lois’s face. With anger swelling inside her, she barely trusted herself to speak. “You-- RAT!” she hissed. “A child is in danger, and you won’t even help unless I... I don’t know... PAY YOU? You’re SICK! Get OUT!”
That sure sounds like Lois. You've captured the sleaze of Wonderman well.
“You know, Clark,” Lois said thoughtfully, “it would probably be a good idea if you weren’t the only one who could contact Superman... however you do it. Really, how DO you do it? You call him, don’t you? Some kind of secret phone number? Well... what if something happened to you? How would I get hold of him then?”
I liked that line too. Lois does have a good point.
Looking forward to the possibility of super-rat
Joan
