Thank you to everyone who read the story and left their comments--it's great to hear what other people think. Your comments have really encouraged me and made me feel very welcome, a great way to start my time on these boards. That said, I'm still trying to learn everything, so I hope these replies are all right...
I am always trying to improve my writing since it's something I enjoy so much, so thank you all for your kind comments on my style.
I, too, feel Jonathan is often overlooked, but Eddie Jones did such a wonderful job portraying him that I can so often see a wealth of emotions on his face--which, needless to say, made me wonder what was going on in his head.
I was a bit worried about the souvenirs beginning (I think I rewrote the beginning about three different times), so I'm so glad you liked it. I love the fact that Clark traveled the world, but knowing how much he longs for permanence and a place to belong, it's always struck me as very sad that he always had to keep moving.
Thanks again for your wonderful comments.
