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Bob

Delightful part. I hope Superman announces that he will leave Metropolis.

Very interesting. Glad that Lois and Clark had a plan to keep Clark and Superman's disappearance separate and that rehearsed speech for the bug in the telephone.

Looking forward to more!

Nice part! The pace of the story is really good and it "feels" like an extended ep of LnC.

Nice insight from Lois on seeing the hero worship in Emily... that's some good food for thought for her!

I wonder how things will play out with Lex, though... I'm glad Clark stepped in at the end and told Lois not to step back into Lex's clutches.

Good part! Looking forward to more!

Superman is in a very tricky situation. Those kinds of rumor campaigns are so difficult to counter. I'll be watching to see how that plays out.

So, when is Clark coming back to Metropolis so he and Lois can go on that promised date?

I like the way Lois and Clark are trying so hard to make Superman's activites seem separate from Clark's.

Loved this line: Lois will still have some of this to overcome.

Nice way to show a very real slander campaign. Right up Lex's alley.

I'm with Happy Girl, bring on that date between Lois and Clark.

oh man! Superman is in a bit of trouble, that is for darn sure!!!

really enjoyed this part. They are going to have a hard time getting past this hurdle!

Hi everyone. Thanks for the feedback. The idea of manufacturing an environment where Superman was not welcome seemed like just the kind of thing Lex would think of. It’s an attack that even Superman would have a very difficult time countering

Framework4 said Aaaarrrggghhh!!!! No! Then Lex would win. Now, he might leave Metropolis to be with Lois elsewhere, but only after they work together to beat down Lex’s lies.

HappyGirl, Joan: As for the date, well, there may just be a few issues to work through first.

Again, thank you all so much.
Bob

At first I wondered if the entire incident was set up, but yeah, this makes so much more sense I do wonder, though, with hundreds of troublemakers spread throughout the city, isn't there a high probability that one of them will spill the beans eventually? Especially, once Lois Lane goes on a rampage?

Emily is interesting. Is she a plant? Doesn't sound like it, She's too helpful. But Lex could just be betting high

Wonder which way you're going to go to straighten things out

Michael

Hi Michael

Lots of interesting thoughts. As for Emily... RAFO

Thanks for the note.
Bob