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FDK: Lethal Qualities 5/15 #78067 03/24/11 07:25 PM
Joined: Jan 2011 Posts: 966 Wyoming AntiKryptonite OP Features Writer
OP AntiKryptonite Features Writer Joined: Jan 2011 Posts: 966 Wyoming	Feedback is appreciated--thanks to everyone who reads and comments!

Re: FDK: Lethal Qualities 5/15 #78068 03/25/11 05:02 AM
Joined: Nov 2010 Posts: 1,724 Likes: 1 out in the cornfields S scifiJoan Merriwether
scifiJoan Merriwether S Joined: Nov 2010 Posts: 1,724 Likes: 1 out in the cornfields	It always bugged me that the mayor felt she had to take such drastic action. I'm glad Lois is doing something about it. Love Superman practicing his powers. Great line here: Quote Practicing his powers, Lois learned, wasn't about the big things at all; it was about the small things. I'm curious about this prison visit and who's got Lois. Joan

Re: FDK: Lethal Qualities 5/15 #78069 03/25/11 09:21 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 303 NY Joy Moony Beat Reporter
Joy Moony Beat Reporter Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 303 NY	evil cliffie! come back here!

Re: FDK: Lethal Qualities 5/15 #78070 03/25/11 10:41 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 4,058 NY Laurach Pulitzer
Laurach Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 4,058 NY	Yes the end was evil! I liked how she protects him though. Laura Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?” Caroline's "Stardust"

Re: FDK: Lethal Qualities 5/15 #78071 03/25/11 12:04 PM
Joined: Dec 2004 Posts: 1,702 Canada J jackiek Merriwether
jackiek Merriwether J Joined: Dec 2004 Posts: 1,702 Canada	Another great part. I always thought that ep ended too soon and that Clark wouldn't have just let it all go so easily. Also always thought it was crazy that they would would use such drastic measures to stop Superman. Nice to see Lois thinking it was horrible and extreme. Can't wait to see what happens next. Superman: I hear you've been looking for me. Lois: All my life.

Re: FDK: Lethal Qualities 5/15 #78072 03/26/11 12:30 AM
Joined: May 2009 Posts: 746 South Africa D DW Columnist
DW Columnist D Joined: May 2009 Posts: 746 South Africa	Great part again and I loved how you described Clark practicing his powers. Though this part is my favourite: Quote So Lois watched him crush a pebble into intricate shapes...without turning it into gravel. She watched him freeze a stick and then melt the ice...without setting the wood on fire. She watched him blur high into the sky and return instantly to her side...without overstepping his chosen mark. She watched him perform aerial maneuvers...without disturbing the branches around him. That was quite a cliffhanger and makes all the more anxious to find out what happens next

Re: FDK: Lethal Qualities 5/15 #78073 03/27/11 07:38 PM
Joined: Jan 2011 Posts: 966 Wyoming AntiKryptonite OP Features Writer
OP AntiKryptonite Features Writer Joined: Jan 2011 Posts: 966 Wyoming	When writing, some parts are very difficult to get down and I feel I have to struggle through them every paragraph of the way. And then others flow very smoothly and, when finished, just feel right. The part in the Kansas field was one of the second kind, which automatically makes it one of my favorites—so I’m glad you all enjoyed! Sorry about the cliff-hanger. I have to admit I hadn’t even thought of it in those terms until I saw your comments. Now I feel bad--it was totally accidental, I assure you! Thanks, everyone, for the feedback and for daring to read such a long story from a new author!

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