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Like it? Love it? Think it should have been tossed into the circular files?  Let me know! Thanks!!
Love and hot fudge,
Bren Ren
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Blogger
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So cute, I loved it. I love stories where everyone figures out the secret and Clark is clueless. Loved his reactions to everyone knowing. I think it is cool where stories have the citizens of smallville knowing and protecting Clarks secret. Great Job. Looking foreward to more stories.
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Kerth
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Soo cute! I loved every bit of this story!
The only known quantity that moves faster than
light is the office grapevine. (from Nan's fabulous Home series)
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Merriwether
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Hahaha, cute! My favorite was the people of Smallville, who have known for years, but don't treat him any differently. "With Clark, what you see is what you get", indeed! Fun story, Bren.  Kathy
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This was adorable and refreshing!What a great little story.
Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”
Caroline's "Stardust"
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Pulitzer
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That was hilarious! Clark is so paranoid about keeping his secret, and having the alternate identity... and everyone knows! It makes a lot of sense when you describe it, too. Of course Henderson would know after the gangsters "shoot" Clark. Of course Perry would figure it out - he didn't get to be EIC of the Daily Planet because he could yodel. Of course Bobby Bigmouth would know - he's a profession snitch and information is his business. Of course the Smallvillians would all know. Frankly, though, I am surprised that Jimmy figured it out. 
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Kerth
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Merriwether
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That was fun! Love the idea of Clark being so clueless while the others had already figured it out.
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Sweet chocolate-y fluff. Ya gotta love it.
Jenna: "That's enough! You release the Charactors from this tragedy right now, you little gnome. Or I promise to send you somewhere far worse than the fifth dimension!"
Kazbo sarcastically: "You have me so scared!" menacing: "try dealing with this!" throws in a slow, agonising death. then disappears.
-from an arguement with Kazbo, the evil muse
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That was hysterical!  I am so glad that the last vignette didn't start out with Lois telling Clark that she had just had an interesting conversation with Ralph...! Joy, Lynn
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Pulitzer
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Very cute. Definitely up for a Kerth next year.  Artemis
History is easy once you've lived it. - Duncan MacLeod
Writing history is easy once you've lived it. - Artemis
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Such fun!!! Very enjoyable. Definitely a keeper!!!!!!! 
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Top Banana
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So cute! Loved the deft humor you put in -- like the er, purple pregnancy test. Simply delightful! Well done!
Reach for the moon, for even if you fail, you'll still land among the stars... and who knows? Maybe you'll meet Superman along the way.
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Top Banana
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Well done. That was like one big LC fanfic in joke. Saving all of Smallville for last was a stroke of genius. 
This *is* my happily ever after.
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