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FDK Double Jeopardy 4/? #78770 05/02/11 01:40 AM
Joined: Jun 2010 Posts: 1,200 Boston, MA mozartmaid OP Top Banana
OP mozartmaid Top Banana Joined: Jun 2010 Posts: 1,200 Boston, MA	You asked for it... And at least Clark realizes that Lana is not the One. That is a relief! Quote "So who decided that kind of insane research should be continued?" "Dr. Paul Lang." See! I told you Langs cannot be trusted! Loved the end though: Quote It wouldn't be the first time a wacko double crossed other wackos." He looked at the two men for a second. "Didn't he say that they could create the perfect army?" All three men stared at one another for several long minutes, laughed nervously, then suddenly they all sat up and began tapping furiously on their computers. "How the hell do we prove something like that?" Jimmy wanted to know. "Damn good question, Jimbo," Clark remarked as he scanned a web page he'd called up. This thing got crazier by the second. Tell me about it! Even though I (obviously) can't stand Lana and Clark together, I'm thankful you seem to be making it brief. Lots of juicy plotting here as well. Can't wait to see where you take it! Reach for the moon, for even if you fail, you'll still land among the stars... and who knows? Maybe you'll meet Superman along the way.

Re: FDK Double Jeopardy 4/? #78771 05/02/11 04:15 AM
Joined: Nov 2010 Posts: 1,724 Likes: 1 out in the cornfields S scifiJoan Merriwether
scifiJoan Merriwether S Joined: Nov 2010 Posts: 1,724 Likes: 1 out in the cornfields	Oh my - clone babies! This will be interesting. Love that Jack is still in the picture. I wish they did more with him. Joan

Re: FDK Double Jeopardy 4/? #78772 05/02/11 06:09 AM
Joined: May 2009 Posts: 746 South Africa D DW Columnist
DW Columnist D Joined: May 2009 Posts: 746 South Africa

Re: FDK Double Jeopardy 4/? #78773 05/02/11 05:38 PM
Joined: Feb 2008 Posts: 2,823 IolantheAlias Pulitzer
IolantheAlias Pulitzer Joined: Feb 2008 Posts: 2,823	I can't believe that six and a half months have passed since Clark first saw Lois! Isn't he checking on her every few days or so? I'm really surprised that he hasn't been more proactive.

Re: FDK Double Jeopardy 4/? #78774 05/02/11 05:43 PM
Joined: Apr 2011 Posts: 9,509 USA VirginiaR Nobel Peace Prize Winner
VirginiaR Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2011 Posts: 9,509 USA	Started reading your story tonight. It always worries me when stories start with Lex & Lois, because I start screaming, "Wait! Where's Clark?" Your Lex seems more evil than the one from the show. Hope Lois and Clark at least meet soon. Poor Lois, drugged and sold out by her family. Lied to and abused in who know how many ways. And you just know Lex is going to take away those kids.... whatever they might be... from her. That's a Lois, who needs a hero. Lana and Clark. Ok. Definitely not the Lana from the show. He obviously isn't the Clark from the show either. As you clearly show here with Lana. Love that you brought in Jack and promoted Jimmy. It always bothered me that after 4 years, he's only written... what 2 articles. (The finding Superman's chunk of costume in All Shook Up and the blurb about the library in Brutal Youth ). Ok, off track there... Love your story so far. Curious what Luckaby's company has to do with all of this. VirginiaR. "On the long road, take small steps." -- Jor-el, "The Foundling" --- "clearly there is a lack of understanding between those two... he speaks Lunkheadanian and she Stubbornanian" -- chelo.

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