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Lots of introspection in this part. Clark is so caring of everyone: of Lois (of course), of his folks, of the TV reporters, of the tenament residents and even of Moose. Moose is so Moose. Will Clark and Lois ever eat the tiarmisu? Or is it just not fated to be?

The one reason for Lois sleeping so soundly that Clark didn't think of was that she had downed a good bottle and a half of wine. That may have had some affect on her sleep patterns. But thinking it was because she was used to Superman, sure would make him feel better.

I'm worried about why Lois is calling to Clark in the pre-dawn hours urgently, so urgently that he forgets to change into the blue suit. Not good. Unless she's calling out to him in her sleep. Then... oooh... what will be getting in the next part?

Nice chapter... funny, it's quieter when Lois is knocked out by a bottle of wine. I love all of the interactions with Moose. They make me .

Hmm... wonder what's going on with Lois. I have a feeling it might not be a problem with a criminal. I'm wondering (and kinda hoping) it's the four-legged and furry variety.

You had one text error... where you meant to have italics, you had typed [o] instead of [i].

Hahah. I love that Superman had to work so often with the television folks to get them so that they wouldn't only give him the credit for putting out the fire.

Ah, Moose!! Eating all the food when everyone's finally gone? Sounds like my dog when I leave the room! Heh heh.

I loved Clark's interactions with Moose. And I'm wondering where the visit of Clark's parents is going to lead us? Are they going to offer some couple's therapy of their own?

Very intrigued about why Lois is calling to him. Did Moose find another stash of chocolate? Or is something more sinister at work? Guess I'll have to wait to see!!

Isn't this the truth?

With that history plus her other baggage, Lois has reasons to be sensitive.

Hope Clark doesn't get into trouble flying without his suit.

Joan

Loved that Clark flew Lois home and then her stuff and couldn't help looking at her.

And it would be so funny if Lois called out to him in her sleep!

And Moose is so Moose!

Looking forward to 6!

Hmm... so, Lois alone on the couch and another half bottle of wine. No idea where this is going /off to check out part 6/

Michael

Oh no no no Clark! How many times are you going to fly around sans-Superman outfit? That's never a good idea.

I love Clark's introspection in this. He's finally getting why Lois is so upset.

Nice chapter.