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I just really, really wanted to write something dark.
Also: Note that this is not some "Alt" Clark - just an alt story in which he actually did go to NK. This is "our" Clark, Lois and time.
Battle On,
Deadly Chakram
"Being with you is stronger than me alone." ~ Clark Kent
"One little spark of inspiration is at the heart of all creation." ~ Figment the Dragon
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Interesting beginning. Can't wait to see where you take this.
Superman: I hear you've been looking for me.
Lois: All my life.
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Thanks jackiek! I'll try to post one chapter every day or so. 
Battle On,
Deadly Chakram
"Being with you is stronger than me alone." ~ Clark Kent
"One little spark of inspiration is at the heart of all creation." ~ Figment the Dragon
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Pulitzer
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I started reading. I am curious to see where it goes. I am glad you are enjoying writing it.Laura
Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”
Caroline's "Stardust"
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Thanks Laura! Part 2 is already up!
Battle On,
Deadly Chakram
"Being with you is stronger than me alone." ~ Clark Kent
"One little spark of inspiration is at the heart of all creation." ~ Figment the Dragon
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Ooohh... Damaged Clark. PTSD Clark. Lots of possibilities for drama and angst here.
I'm looking forward to this, dark topic and all. I know you'll do a good job with it.
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Originally posted by IolantheAlias:
Ooohh... Damaged Clark. PTSD Clark. Lots of possibilities for drama and angst here.
I'm looking forward to this, dark topic and all. I know you'll do a good job with it. Exactly! PTSD Clark. Thanks, I hope I don't disappoint you!
Battle On,
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"Being with you is stronger than me alone." ~ Clark Kent
"One little spark of inspiration is at the heart of all creation." ~ Figment the Dragon
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Features Writer
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Very sad. I hope Clark's natural strength can help him get through this.
I love how supportive Lois is.
And I love how Perry and Jimmy helped out! The sentence about Jimmy coming over after work to keep her company was very touching. Obviously, Perry's giving her a lot of leeway as well. They're great friends to Lois and Clark, which is something it sounds like they both need right now.
Very intriguing!
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Originally posted by AntiKryptonite:
Very sad. I hope Clark's natural strength can help him get through this.
I love how supportive Lois is.
And I love how Perry and Jimmy helped out! The sentence about Jimmy coming over after work to keep her company was very touching. Obviously, Perry's giving her a lot of leeway as well. They're great friends to Lois and Clark, which is something it sounds like they both need right now.
Very intriguing! Thanks AK! Perry and Jimmy are great characters, so I always try to put a good light on them, even if I don't write dialogue for them.
Battle On,
Deadly Chakram
"Being with you is stronger than me alone." ~ Clark Kent
"One little spark of inspiration is at the heart of all creation." ~ Figment the Dragon
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