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I hope that was a debut you weren't expecting! smile Stay tuned for the final chapter--I'll post it by Thursday at the latest!


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smile1 Superman to the rescue! grumble I mean, couldn't he save EVERYONE else in Smallville first?

I have a bad feeling about Lex knowing that there's a big supply of Kryptonite in Smallville. eek I don't want Lex anywhere near Clark's hometown.

I'm glad Clark could hear Lois calling to him despite the tornado. smile That's one thing they never made clear on the show, how far can Superman hear with his super hearing?


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Yeah - Superman makes his official debute. smile1

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Darn right it’s tight! And in all the right places too!
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Loved this chapter--quintessential Lois and the same for Clark. I knew she was going to go out and get kidnapped, more of that habit of hers of jumping without looking.

Luthor really makes me mad, but at least thus far, he still doesn't know that his Kryptonite can hurt the man who's becoming his number one enemy.

I was very surprised when Superman debuted--I hope it doesn't hurt him that it's in Smallville and that no one ever connects the dots. Hopefully, if everyone thinks Clark is still in Europe, there won't be any reason to look too closely.

Loved the last line--very apropos.

Looking forward to the last chapter!

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Well, I wasn't expecting that debut smile

Great chapter and Lois will always jump in without checking the water level.

I also loved the line at the end!

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He eyes me with uncertainty, no doubt seeing danger in my methods-- but then he lets out a light laugh of exasperation. “Lois… are you always like this?”

I simply grin at him in return. “You’ll get used to it!”
laugh And that's Lois before she gets used to having a handy lifesaver only a shout away.

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“Lois, I’m happy to date you—but we’re still getting to know each other,” he starts, but I hush him up quickly by placing my finger on his lips.
TskTskTsk... Can't they just spend one night at the Lexor as Mr. and Mrs. Kent. That should take care of the wedding stuff and then he could stay in Lois's apartment all officially.

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“Don’t worry, Lois. When it’s time for me to make my appearance on the world’s stage, you’ll be the first to know.”
Yeah, probably because she's screaming for him laugh

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I take a few wrong turns, oddly ending up in a wine cellar. I guess when you’re a billionaire you need a cache of wine even at the office!
/whispers/ He also lives there.

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I move closer, sticking to the edge of the building, and a gust of wind suddenly snatches my cap and skews my wig. Before I can right it, Luthor sees me!
I wondered if she was going to fall. Only now, I think Clark's already back in Smallville by then so that might have hurt.

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I protest, realizing how stupid it was to come here all alone, without even telling Clark what I was up to. But before I can even kick again at the goons holding me, a handkerchief comes to my mouth and I’m suddenly very sleepy…
hyper

wave Michael, going to look for the bow now with which this will be tied up...


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