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FDK: Chocolate Lab 9/9 #79941 06/17/11 04:36 PM
Joined: Feb 2008 Posts: 2,823 IolantheAlias OP Pulitzer
OP IolantheAlias Pulitzer Joined: Feb 2008 Posts: 2,823	Feedback here please.

Re: FDK: Chocolate Lab 9/9 #79942 06/17/11 07:29 PM
Joined: Jun 2010 Posts: 1,200 Boston, MA mozartmaid Top Banana
mozartmaid Top Banana Joined: Jun 2010 Posts: 1,200 Boston, MA	Loved it!! Loved that dessert ended up being each other. Great story!!! Reach for the moon, for even if you fail, you'll still land among the stars... and who knows? Maybe you'll meet Superman along the way.

Re: FDK: Chocolate Lab 9/9 #79943 06/17/11 07:52 PM
Joined: Jan 2007 Posts: 238 FL angelsgmaw Hack from Nowheresville
angelsgmaw Hack from Nowheresville Joined: Jan 2007 Posts: 238 FL	I spent the last part of 9 awaiting Moose eating the tiramisu. After all, that is his trademark. We'd be disappointed if he didn't get it. Nice story. Lois with anything other than a tank of fish stretches the imagination. So nice to meet Moose. But as usual, the best part is the romance between Lois & Clark. Thanks. Pat

Re: FDK: Chocolate Lab 9/9 #79944 06/17/11 07:59 PM
Joined: Apr 2011 Posts: 9,509 USA VirginiaR Nobel Peace Prize Winner
VirginiaR Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2011 Posts: 9,509 USA	VirginiaR. "On the long road, take small steps." -- Jor-el, "The Foundling" --- "clearly there is a lack of understanding between those two... he speaks Lunkheadanian and she Stubbornanian" -- chelo.

Re: FDK: Chocolate Lab 9/9 #79945 06/18/11 05:04 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 4,058 NY Laurach Pulitzer
Laurach Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 4,058 NY	MMM the ending was very tasty! Laura Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?” Caroline's "Stardust"

Re: FDK: Chocolate Lab 9/9 #79946 06/18/11 06:29 AM
Joined: May 2003 Posts: 104 Michigan S sarah Hack from Nowheresville
sarah Hack from Nowheresville S Joined: May 2003 Posts: 104 Michigan	I loved this story. The only sad part is that it is over. Sarah www.zazzle.com/designsbyhebert

Re: FDK: Chocolate Lab 9/9 #79947 06/18/11 04:18 PM
Joined: May 2011 Posts: 6,142 Likes: 3 Connecticut Deadly Chakram Nobel Peace Prize Winner
Deadly Chakram Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: May 2011 Posts: 6,142 Likes: 3 Connecticut	Quote Self-consciously, Clark did so. The sun felt nice. It wasn’t as strengthening as being ten thousand feet above Metropolis at noon. But it was nice. LOL! Quote Clark nodded obediently and went back around the bed. He laid down in the sunbeam. Lois sat on the bed and then stretched herself out next to him. They lay shoulder to shoulder. She took his hand but didn’t look at him. Awwwwwwww! Quote He figured that if he apologized two or three times daily, he could get a thousand apologies in within the next year. Such a romantic! sigh Quote Lois had begun running her finger up and down his chest and his brain had short-circuited. LOL! Quote “That dog ate your tiramisu again,” Clark said through clenched teeth. He was bitter. In view of the recent warming of relations between himself and Lois… well, he’d had plans for that dessert. Poor Clark cannot catch a break! LOVE the ending! Go Lois! Seduce Clark! Love this story. Battle On, Deadly Chakram "Being with you is stronger than me alone." ~ Clark Kent "One little spark of inspiration is at the heart of all creation." ~ Figment the Dragon

Re: FDK: Chocolate Lab 9/9 #79948 06/20/11 10:35 AM
Joined: Nov 2010 Posts: 1,724 Likes: 1 out in the cornfields S scifiJoan Merriwether
scifiJoan Merriwether S Joined: Nov 2010 Posts: 1,724 Likes: 1 out in the cornfields	Aw...Moose got their dessert again! Great ending! Joan

Re: FDK: Chocolate Lab 9/9 #79949 06/22/11 05:29 AM
Joined: May 2009 Posts: 746 South Africa D DW Columnist
DW Columnist D Joined: May 2009 Posts: 746 South Africa	Just caught up with 8 & 9 ... Loved this story and it was just

Re: FDK: Chocolate Lab 9/9 #79950 06/23/11 05:03 AM
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bellarase Beat Reporter Joined: Apr 2008 Posts: 397	Oh this story was amazing. Very well written and very witty. I had some serious laugh out loud moments in it. Plus Clark getting shot had some 'hurt/comfort' aspects. And not one revelations but TWO. (or 4, if you count Nigel and the other guy whose name I think is Jason but I'm too lazy to go look up :p ) Anyway, fantastic job and I really loved this! LOIS:I don't like you. MAYSON: Really? Oh god, that is such a relief - I don't like you either. LOIS: That makes me feel so much better

Re: FDK: Chocolate Lab 9/9 #79951 06/26/11 06:23 AM
Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 9,066 Likes: 31 Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner
Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 9,066 Likes: 31	Quote “You love me?” Clark asked incredulously, rolling on his side to face her. Lois snuggled up to him. “Of course I do, you big lunkhead.” Well, there've been hints. Like the lack of killing after the initial looks that might kill. And the lack of a shirt. And his horizontal state of being... Quote “That dog ate your tiramisu again,” Michael Join us on the #loisclark Discord server! We talk about fanfic, our favorite show, life, and more! (It’s almost like the IRC days of old again!) I go by Michael on the Archives.

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