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FDK: The Case of The Tickler (1/?) #80715 07/19/11 05:04 PM
Joined: Dec 2007 Posts: 720 Indiana, USA L Lois_Lane_Fan OP Columnist
OP Lois_Lane_Fan Columnist L Joined: Dec 2007 Posts: 720 Indiana, USA	Thoughts?

Re: FDK: The Case of The Tickler (1/?) #80716 07/19/11 05:54 PM
Joined: Dec 2008 Posts: 2,181 Likes: 29 SW Vic, Australia Female Hawk Kerth
Female Hawk Kerth Joined: Dec 2008 Posts: 2,181 Likes: 29 SW Vic, Australia	Interesting premise. The scene with Perry, Jimmy, Lois and Clark was great. I could hear the disbelief in their words. So, exactly how much damage can you do with a feather duster-gun? Corrina.

Re: FDK: The Case of The Tickler (1/?) #80717 07/19/11 09:05 PM
Joined: Apr 2011 Posts: 9,509 USA VirginiaR Nobel Peace Prize Winner
VirginiaR Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2011 Posts: 9,509 USA	Funny! I was giggling throughout. Thank you. Always enjoy a good laugh. And if my daughter is anything to go by, yes, people will do ANYTHING if you promise they will get tickled otherwise. CK isn't ticklish is he? Hmmmm. I wonder what will show up in part 2. The black skin tight outfit with a red feather dangling from her chest made me think it was a different nfic type of Tickler at first. Glad to know it's the good ol' fashioned clean kind. VirginiaR. "On the long road, take small steps." -- Jor-el, "The Foundling" --- "clearly there is a lack of understanding between those two... he speaks Lunkheadanian and she Stubbornanian" -- chelo.

Re: FDK: The Case of The Tickler (1/?) #80718 07/19/11 09:16 PM
Joined: Jun 2011 Posts: 2,131 California Mouserocks Kerth
Mouserocks Kerth Joined: Jun 2011 Posts: 2,131 California	At first, with the title being "The Case of the Tickler" I was wondering... I think this is a clever start- very cute. And I certainly hope CK is ticklish... Can't wait for more! Nothing spoils a good story like the arrival of an eye witness. --Mark Twain

Re: FDK: The Case of The Tickler (1/?) #80719 07/20/11 06:13 AM
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DW Columnist D Joined: May 2009 Posts: 746 South Africa	Cannot wait for part 2! I'm also wondering if Clark is ticklish now!

Re: FDK: The Case of The Tickler (1/?) #80720 07/20/11 06:37 AM
Joined: Dec 2007 Posts: 720 Indiana, USA L Lois_Lane_Fan OP Columnist
OP Lois_Lane_Fan Columnist L Joined: Dec 2007 Posts: 720 Indiana, USA	I'm glad everyone thought it was funny. The scene with Perry, Jimmy, Lois and Clark was fun to write. Thanks for the feedback. Since the first chapter was more of a teaser, I'll have chapter two up soon. That way, we can get into the plot a little bit more.

Re: FDK: The Case of The Tickler (1/?) #80721 07/20/11 12:59 PM
Joined: Dec 2005 Posts: 2,445 London, England Marcus Rowland Kerth
Marcus Rowland Kerth Joined: Dec 2005 Posts: 2,445 London, England	Interesting premise - looking forward to more. Marcus L. Rowland Forgotten Futures, The Scientific Romance Role Playing Game

Re: FDK: The Case of The Tickler (1/?) #80722 07/21/11 06:22 AM
Joined: Dec 2007 Posts: 720 Indiana, USA L Lois_Lane_Fan OP Columnist
OP Lois_Lane_Fan Columnist L Joined: Dec 2007 Posts: 720 Indiana, USA	Quote Originally posted by Marcus Rowland: Interesting premise - looking forward to more. Glad you liked the opening. I'm not sure if you've seen it or not yet, but I actually already posted a second chapter. I just thought I'd let you know in case you'd missed it.

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