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Last edited by VirginiaR; 08/04/14 07:43 PM. Reason: Fixed broken Link

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laugh clap clap clap Fantastic update!
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Your boyfriend. Can’t live with him. Can’t shoot him.
clap Perfect! I was just waiting for that to come up with Martha! And with that I'll stop for this chapter. Great read! And a great time to post- actually had time to read it immediately and comment on it extensively- and it was no skin off my nose! dance Perfect, I repeat!


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Asking for autographs. Asking if Superman was taking her to lunch. Asking to have her photo taken with them. Asking if the blue suit came off. Asking if Superman was picking her up after work.
10 bucks a piece. No, he's holding up a bridge. 20 bucks. Not as long as he's a lunkhead. And if he knows what's good for him.

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Clark refused to have Superman flat out deny it because the Man in Blue didn’t lie. To him, Lois was his girlfriend. And since he was Superman, he couldn’t deny it. Semantics!
Suggests flat hand applied to back of head. Always works for Gibbs and DiNozzo.

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It was her last chance to contact the reclusive billionaire
Oooh Oooh!

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so she wouldn’t have to go on her blackmail date.
She could always spike his drink and have Superman drop Tempus off inside the Blue Oyster Bar.

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Her body was still stiff from coming to edge of pleasure, tasting it, but not being able to jump in.
Recommends a hot bath and a loofah.

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A small part of her wished they had gone ahead and made love.
About yee small and living between her ears?

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What’s life without a little risk?
And the morning sickness will go away after a few months.

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But the larger part of Lois knew that she needed to make their first time more than a glorified groping session at his parents’ apartment.
So, take a loan and invite him to the Lexor's Honeymoon Suite. Might even get a story about a Tsunami machine out of it.

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That man of hers turned Lois into a silly teenager at his touch. Which wouldn’t be so bad if her brain didn’t turn into that of an unthinking gooey teenager as well.
So, her hormones regress. And her brain regresses. Or matures...?

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Who are you calling a teenager?
You?

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“Clark asked me to walk you to your bus stop, in case he didn’t make it in time to get you.”
Second hand protection detail goofy

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Your boyfriend. Can’t live with him. Can’t shoot him.
Cute. Need some green bullets?

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Yeah. He’s quite a super guy,” replied Jack.

Lois turned and faced the kid. “Excuse me?”

Jack looked her directly in the eye. “You heard me.”
Ah, the next one on her tail for two-timing her boyfriend for the whole world to see. At least, her father is supposedly discreet.

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Jack gabbed her arm and kept them walking. “Lois, I know you won’t believe me, but this is bigger than you and your boyfriend.”

“What are you talking about?” she stammered.

“Perry didn’t tell you?” He shook his head. “He didn’t tell me either, but I figured it out.”
Resurrecting the DP?

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“Don’t you think it’s strange that the people Perry has hired to work at Daily Books are all specialists in their departments?”
Resurrecting the DP.

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And you… you were a fluke,”
Lucky fluke.

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“So you’re telling me I’m the biggest sucker in Metropolis? Great.”
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MouseRocks: Thanks for the super long FDK! clap Glad you enjoyed my revert to A-Plot.

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What?! Jack knows? *JACK*?! Quite the little twist.
Back in Part 5, Jack came up to Lois after Tempus and Wells left and asked what that was about. And Lois told him that they told her she was destined to marry a "super guy." He put one-and-one together...

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Twists and turns at every corner in this chapter! Though I'd rather like to think that Jack's right about his crazy theories- it's not so far fetched that Perry wouldn't concoct it up. Then again, Perry's mentioned he's got a dislike for Jack, so maybe it is far fetched. Unless... /mind wanders away at the infinite possibilities/
Perry doesn't dislike Jack, he was just jealous that Alice went after the younger man while exposed to 'Revenge.' More of a male-ego / pride thing.

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Speaking of which- how old was Lex at the time? I mean, I know Lex (or at least canon Lex) was some odd years older than Lois and Clark, but I didn't think he was exactly old enough to have blown up a newspaper in the seventies, though it depends too on when he became in charge of the company... then again, he's always had a bit of an evil streak. Who's to say that he didn't have an affinity for destroying things even at a young age? Lex as a child could have gone around blowing stuff up. Most of us played "house". Lex played "corporate takeover".
I'm sure this has been hashed out in a separate thread somewhere, but Lex is definately an OLDER man. First of all, Virtual Destroyed has Jaxon born in 1962, making him 34! Picture of Jaxon\'s bio listing his birthday
(which makes him 4 years older than Clark!) And since Jaxon's the younger brother of Lex Jr. (I'm assuming that Lex would name his FIRST son after himself.) L&C also discuss Lex's age at some point -- when Lex Jr shows up in VftP or IGYUMS -- So, ANYWAY, I assume that Lex is close to Perry's age for this fic, although if Perry turned 50 in 1994, Lex would definately have to be older than him, or started procreating much earlier. Hope that makes things more clear. laugh

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Wow. Can that man *get* any creepier?? First starts looking through her laundry, now staking out her apartment and practically stalking her? And it's not like she can even get a super-security system!
Well, Nunk is a tabloid reporter, did you expect? clap

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/slow motion runs to stop Clark/ NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! Don't do it, Clark! If there's one thing you shouldn't do, it's buy the tie!
And at first I thought you just didn't want him to shop at L.L. Emporium for Men (L.L. for Lex Luthor - I always thought he should have a clothing line. laugh )

Thanks again for the great comments.


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Michael: Thank you for the sad

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Second hand protection detail
Yep.

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Cute. Need some green bullets?
Technically, she doesn't want him dead.

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/does math/ 29 y/o Lex. Hmm... probably had just had his first billion and wanted to celebrate with fireworks.
You have Lex born in 1949?

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See, Clark's just picked it up at the store.
No, Clark picked it up from Jonathan and then passed in on to Jack.

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About 10,000 hookers. 14,000 cops. 1 mayor. 35 city councilmen. 117 judges. 1 DA. 30 ADAs. 14,312 crooks.
I love how Lex has almost as many cops as crooks in his pocketbook. laugh

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What's the difference between a corporate head and a crook? A confirmed sentence.
lol I hadn't heard that one before.

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Superman dating Wonder Woman?
Lois has enough problems without involving super competition.

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Do a home video and publish it online?
Back in 1994? With slow-speed internet? Without the use of digital video camera? Boy, THAT would take forever to download!

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She does have a point. And later: Breaking up would really not serve any purpose and make things worse. Ooooh, that reminds me off the wedding-challenge. Lois has to marry Clark to disassociate herself from Superman. And so, they have to make it look real
Hhhmmmm.

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Oooooooo. And I admit, I had no idea why Lois was flirting with him. Totally missed the evil streak there.
The eyelash batting wasn't flirtatous, it was faux-innocence.

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Okay, I did not see that one coming. She seemed all right before. Can we put it on the time of the month?
YOU want to offer that suggestion to Lois? We'll all visit you in the virtual hospital.

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And just imagine, once they get to angry sex and makeup sex. Hope the neighbors are all deaf.
Well, she does live downstairs to Mayson... serves that A.D.A. for flirting with Lois's man. laugh

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Oh dear no. Is Lois going to *sing*?
... Oh dear. Oh dear. Oh dear.
Hhhmmm. Not going to expect long FDK from Michael for Part 29. Got it.

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Somebody worried about concrete PJs?
I doubt "The Boss" would wait until he was asleep in bed.

Thanks for the comment. Will post 29 tonight before I head to bed.


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Blue Oyster Bar? I think I know the one. Isn't that from Police Academy?
Jep. They male gays joint. Complete with uniforms, collars, and leather.

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Basement efficiencies only come with shower stalls.
Poor Lois. She really needs to move into MJ's CBnB. (Yes, the C is intentional.)

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Technically, she doesn't want him dead.
Yet?

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You have Lex born in 1949?
John Shea is. Incidentally, Tracy Scoggins (Cat) is also 11 years older than Teri Hatcher, which gives the whole Lois/Cat dynamic a whole new dimension.

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Lois has enough problems without involving super competition.
/Points to Terry's The Wonder of Love

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Boy, THAT would take forever to download!
blush Right. You didn't move it forward. blush blush

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YOU want to offer that suggestion to Lois? We'll all visit you in the virtual hospital.
Umm... /goes looking for one of the Superpower-transference-thingies from the show.
Also, I was thinking Clark might... That's one hole he hasn't yet tried out...

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Hhhmmm. Not going to expect long FDK from Michael for Part 29. Got it.
Hey, I was just saying it sounds bad with the whole toasting action going on during the party...

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Thanks for the comment. Will post 29 tonight before I head to bed.
/does calculations.../ Sounds like a breakfast-treat hyper

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