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FDK - Green-Eyed Monster (31/37) #82569 10/07/11 05:25 AM
Joined: Apr 2011 Posts: 9,509 USA VirginiaR OP Nobel Peace Prize Winner
OP VirginiaR Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2011 Posts: 9,509 USA	Please put feedback here. Thank you. *** Green-Eyed Monster TOC Part 32 posting on Monday (or late Sunday night). Last edited by VirginiaR; 08/04/14 07:34 PM. Reason: Fixed broken Link VirginiaR. "On the long road, take small steps." -- Jor-el, "The Foundling" --- "clearly there is a lack of understanding between those two... he speaks Lunkheadanian and she Stubbornanian" -- chelo.

Re: FDK - Green-Eyed Monster (31/37) #82570 10/07/11 06:45 AM
Joined: Jun 2011 Posts: 2,131 California Mouserocks Kerth
Mouserocks Kerth Joined: Jun 2011 Posts: 2,131 California	Quote Each time she met the man, she liked him less and less. She did not know why. He was all charms and smiles, platitudes and compliments, but next to Clark’s… … everything… … sweetness and charm… …and rocking bod… Lex seemed phony. Yay! That sounds like fun! Quote Bile rose in her throat as she realized that wasn’t Tempus’s file, but a file on her. Uh-oh. Quote “I wanted this date for one reason and one reason only. You are going to tell me Superman’s secret identity. It’s as simple as that, Lois. I know you know it.” Nothing spoils a good story like the arrival of an eye witness. --Mark Twain

Re: FDK - Green-Eyed Monster (31/37) #82571 10/09/11 12:39 AM
Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 9,066 Likes: 31 Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner
Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 9,066 Likes: 31	Quote When she finally had money to buy new furniture, she would probably gravitate to knock-offs of pieces like this. Bad, Lois, bad. Quote Can you really see Clark agreeing to furniture like this, Lois? This is not his style at all. He wouldn’t be able to put up his heels and watch the game on furniture like this. He can just float. Fine. But what about steamy make-out sessions? Huh? Okay, you win. Quote They were just dating, not buying furniture together. Lois, do you really believe that? Quote “Did you need someplace to change, Ms. Lane?” Angry boyfriend with heatvision. Any time now, if you please. Quote “Oh, well. Shall we see what’s in here, then?” So, is he trying to extort her by threatening to tell her boyfriend about her secret fun with the flying freak? Quote What did Big Blue do to anger you?” Suggested she's unfaithful? Squared her away in a box? Quote Just one simple ‘Help Superman!’ will do.” Wonderful. Encore! Encore! Quote Sarah was the exception – she kept pace with him. What a busy worker bee. Quote Clark knew if she was truly in trouble, she would have called out to him – if she could. /nods gravely/ Quote Sarah joined Clark at the windows and gazed down at Ching. “He’s still there,” Clark said, stating the obvious. “I know. I don’t need his protection here, but he insists,” she replied, a rare smile gracing her lips. What a wonderful double-meaning statement. And shouldn't the entire concept be a big tip-off to Clark? Quote “Out of love?” Clark asked, glancing over at her. “Duty.” She nodded. “Ching is a good lieutenant.” At her words, Ching’s shoulders seemed to shift slightly with pride. Looks like over-protection and listening in on your secret girlfriend's a Kryptonian trait. He might do well to confirm that in writing with Zara and show it to Lois. Then, he can always claim she's racist when she complains about his spying on her. Quote Why does it seem like the man can hear every word you speak? Yes. Strange, isn't it? Quote “Do you think he’s scared to take his rightful place as God?” Zara! Bad girl. Quote She had picked up on his one brief mention of Krypton from the press conference? Yes? Quote Either she’s the best straight man to your comedy routine you’ve ever met or she’s one odd duck. I’m leaning towards the latter. Royalty. What can you do. But marry her. Quote Lois was singing. Huh. It sounds good. And bad. And I'm scared. Quote Her voice was melancholy and slightly rough with an emotional edge he could not place. Not good. Quote For once I’ve someone I know won’t desert me I’m not alone anymore Funny thing is, this also works with 'dessert' with two 's'. Quote For once I can say This is mine, you can’t take it As long as I know I’ve got love, I can make it Not good at all. Quote Then Lois whispered, “I know you’re worried, but I’m okay, just laying low. /wipes brow/ Quote I’ll repeat this message again in an hour, if I can. Quote If I haven’t fallen asleep. Oh, good thing, then? Quote Clark wasn’t listening; he was focused on what Lois had said. ‘I’ll repeat this in an hour. If I can.’ * End of Part 31 * /runs around, screaming in despair/ Michael Join us on the #loisclark Discord server! We talk about fanfic, our favorite show, life, and more! (It’s almost like the IRC days of old again!) I go by Michael on the Archives.

Re: FDK - Green-Eyed Monster (31/37) #82572 10/10/11 05:30 AM
Joined: Apr 2011 Posts: 9,509 USA VirginiaR OP Nobel Peace Prize Winner
OP VirginiaR Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2011 Posts: 9,509 USA	MouseRocks: Thank you for the Quote Well, if it looks like a duck and walks like a duck... Quote Is this just a recording device to give himself reminders? Or has he been recording the whole time so far? Methinks it's the former, but... Hhhmmm. Quote Ooh, yay! Interesting way to get his attention without letting Luthor know she's doing so? But is she singing for Luthor, or is she locked up somewhere singing? Hhhmmmm. Quote Uh-oh. That's not a very good message. Nope. Quote No, Clark! This is one of those times when you disagree with Lois and get into a mini-argument-slash-debate with her that puts your relationship on the rocks but turns out okay in the end because you still love each other! Unless, of course, Luthor has some shiny green rocks and she's just protecting you that way... either way, not good. Well, Lois did want Clark to trust her whether or not she was lying to him... Watch out what you wish for... Quote shudders/ Ominous. Can't wait for Monday's(Sunday's?) update! Must know what happens next. Good chapter! Thank you. Posting later than expected as I got home late last night. Soon. VirginiaR. "On the long road, take small steps." -- Jor-el, "The Foundling" --- "clearly there is a lack of understanding between those two... he speaks Lunkheadanian and she Stubbornanian" -- chelo.

Re: FDK - Green-Eyed Monster (31/37) #82573 10/10/11 05:51 AM
Joined: Apr 2011 Posts: 9,509 USA VirginiaR OP Nobel Peace Prize Winner
OP VirginiaR Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2011 Posts: 9,509 USA	Michael: Thank you for the comments. Just one question, why is Lois "bad" for liking Lex's furnature? Quote Lois, do you really believe that? Um... after that cheating streetwalker comment... Quote /expects a paint-on dress off black silk, one layer. No back. No underwear. And a stylish golden leash for her hip. No, she only wears such things in the comfort of her apartment. Quote So long as he's not ordering from Ralph's Pagoda. Those girls are likely to have all sorts of STDs. Is THAT why Lois's stomach got upset? Because's Ralph's is a front for a low-brow call-girl pussy-cat house? Quote Wow. Ivy's been out long. And now she has to go back? Bad, Lois. Bad. Lois doesn't want to say the wrong thing to the boss to make her situation worse. And Ivy doesn't box well. Quote imagines Lex building two smaller buildings to flank it. Yes, so every man in Metropolis has to look up to him. I soooooo can see this! Quote And Ivy's not even mentioning that Lois already has, hastily and without checking the water level, one might add, declined his offer of taking a warm-up shower together. So, now it's both her fault and her turn to arrange for an all-together Clark. Good catch. Maybe Ivy'll say something for the Archive version. Quote Angry boyfriend with heatvision. Any time now, if you please. You mean that angry boyfriend she 'forgot' to tell of this meeting? Quote Yep, this sounds like a real setup. Especially combined with the 'tax write-off' comment. Auditors are expensive. In-House auditors already on salary. Quote Okay, Lex knows about her public boyfriend Clark and her not-so-secret boyfriend Superman. And he is sure that Superman's got a secret identity. And yet, he actually assumes Lois is two-timing her public boyfriend instead of them being the same person. Lex's arrogance combined with his lack of morals most definitely is making him blind to the obvious. Glasses are a really good disguise! Quote Umm... 'blue'? Probably a language thing. Slang. Usually phrased with round things that bounce. Quote Good thing she kept the talk to 'Kal' and 'Clark'. Sometimes it's good to be ones own best friend. Quote Oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo! Wonderful. Encore! Encore! So, you like nut-cracking scenes? Or only with Luthor? Quote What a wonderful double-meaning statement. And shouldn't the entire concept be a big tip-off to Clark? What Clark knows of Krypton is it was a planet about to fall apart when he heard the 4th Jor-El message from the Globe. If it blew up, why would he assume the Kryptonians followed him to Earth? Quote Looks like over-protection and listening in on your secret girlfriend's a Kryptonian trait. He might do well to confirm that in writing with Zara and show it to Lois. Then, he can always claim she's racist when she complains about his spying on her. Is it racist or speciesist? Who knew that being Kryptonian would be the excuse he needed to get out of this mess?! If only he had told her sooner... Quote Royalty. What can you do. But marry her. But like most royality, he wants the streetwalker. Quote Funny thing is, this also works with 'dessert' with two 's'. Quote /runs around, screaming in despair/ Oh, dear. Poor Michael. Posting soon, I promise. VirginiaR. "On the long road, take small steps." -- Jor-el, "The Foundling" --- "clearly there is a lack of understanding between those two... he speaks Lunkheadanian and she Stubbornanian" -- chelo.

Re: FDK - Green-Eyed Monster (31/37) #82574 10/10/11 08:05 AM
Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 9,066 Likes: 31 Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner
Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 9,066 Likes: 31	Quote ust one question, why is Lois "bad" for liking Lex's furnature? Do I have to post a picture of her accepting Lex's proposal? Quote And Ivy doesn't box well. That phrase... Poor Jor-El. Quote Oh, dear. Poor Michael. Posting soon, I promise. /peek at 32. Still have to do FDK, first Michael Join us on the #loisclark Discord server! We talk about fanfic, our favorite show, life, and more! (It’s almost like the IRC days of old again!) I go by Michael on the Archives.

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