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#8288 11/25/03 04:36 AM
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Ooh, that was nice. Y'know, long stories are good, and A-plots are good, but sometimes I just need a good old-fashioned revelation vignette, and this was a good one. smile

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Why didn’t you tell me in the beginning? When you asked me out, I mean. When we were alone on that boat.
That's a good question, Lois <g> Just call him Lunkhead-Man.

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He cut her off. “There are no more barriers between us, Lois. I promise. Trust me this time...”

He kissed her again, this time more demandingly and passionately.

That kiss was a silent vow.

It was a silent key, opening the doors and breaking the walls between them for good as two became one.
WAFFy sigh... lovely.

PJ

#8289 11/25/03 04:44 AM
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Hi,

Cute story. smile1


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#8290 11/25/03 06:34 AM
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Ahhh, just sweet laugh

Liked it a lot. thumbsup

Julia

#8291 11/25/03 06:59 AM
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Julie, I liked this too. Very nice - romantic and WAFFy, with a bit of Lunkhead Clark (TM) thrown in. wink

There were some spelling/grammar issues, but nothing major, and this will be picked up by your Archive GE in any case... you have sent this to the Archive, haven't you??? wildguy


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Just a fly-by! *waves*
#8292 11/26/03 10:42 AM
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Thanks, guys... /me blushes blush

Julie


Mulder: Imagine if you could come back and take out five people who had caused you to suffer. Who would they be?
Scully: I only get five?
Mulder: I remembered your birthday this year, didn't I, Scully?

(The X-Files)
#8293 11/26/03 12:25 PM
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AWWww...sigh. Laura


Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”

Caroline's "Stardust"
#8294 11/26/03 09:52 PM
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Julie

A lovely story - very romantic and so WAFFy! goofy

Thanks for sharing it.

Tricia cool

#8295 11/30/03 04:14 AM
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Cute and Sweet Julie
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