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Yes, please don't! I tend to ramble in my comments (I wonder where I picked up that trait? I probably watch too much old TV shows or something.) Hmmm...nope. Doesn't ring any bells.  I agree with you. But then again, I liked Mayson and Dan too <<ducking  (Okay, enough procrastining on my story or Mrs. L is going to  )  <cracks imaginary whip>
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Originally posted by Deadly Chakram: <cracks imaginary whip> Right back at ya!
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</font><blockquote><font size="1" face="Verdana, Helvetica, sans-serif">quote:</font><hr /><font size="2" face="Verdana, Helvetica, sans-serif">Originally posted by VirginiaR: <strong> </font><blockquote><font size="1" face="Verdana, Helvetica, sans-serif">quote:</font><hr /><font size="2" face="Verdana, Helvetica, sans-serif">Originally posted by Deadly Chakram: <strong>  Point well taken. Does it help if I say that Chapter 17 is about 75% done? 
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His brothers often teased him for spending so much time among the flowers, It would certainly explain his lack in partaking of the care services. His mother, Lara, had been the one to plan this section, and had personally seen each bush planted. Roses had always been her favorites, and, as a result, they had also become Kal's favorites.  What if we don't get along? You fight. And have lots of make-up sex? What if I can't love her? What am I going to do?" /hands over prescription for little blue pills/ “I'm really that predictable?" Kal asked, surprised. That’s going to be interesting later on with Lois. And you know that he and Elle haven't been happy together in years now." Too much partaking in the professional care services? The El family has a long history of arranged marriages that worked out well. Zara and me. Mom and Dad. Our grandparents. And so on through the line." Yes, the concubines most definitely seem to be helping. Lux Uthor and his late wife."  And I think I know why she’s his ‘late’ wife. "You're welcome. Now, when should we schedule the bachelor party for?" Jai's grin overtook his entire face. Depends on when most of Nita’s colleagues are not yet booked for the evening? "Go ahead and disappoint your wife on your wedding night. 
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It would certainly explain his lack in partaking of the care services.  That sounds like a very non-egalitarian society. Hope it won’t come to riots. Very stable planet. Unless Lois has no pulse... I’m sure Nor would not have trouble with that question. Right. Make her pierce them even if she doesn't want to? That doesn’t sound good at all. They’re not even doing anything bad and people are scared. Yep, things are going to go boom soon. No, no, no. The same fear that shoots through you when you pass a cop car on the highway, even when you know you're obeying all of the traffic laws.  Ooooooohhh! So, will he seek her out in her home? Umm.... Hmm...Lois's blood on the wedding sheet? Second son. No one cares if and when he consummates said marriage. So, is it already time for part 3? Yes? Please? Pretty please? Mayyyyyyybe I will be nice and post in a couple of days.
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I'll hold you to that. To all other readers and feedback-givers: Once the next chapter is posted, we will let DC wait as long for feedback as we have to wait for a new chapter... If that doesn't work to shorten the posting intervals, I don't know what will. 
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Originally posted by Lara Joelle Kent: I'll hold you to that.
To all other readers and feedback-givers: Once the next chapter is posted, we will let DC wait as long for feedback as we have to wait for a new chapter... If that doesn't work to shorten the posting intervals, I don't know what will. OMG! I had no idea you were capable of such evil, Lara! I'll see what I can do about getting chapter 3 re-read and prepped for the boards as soon as I can.
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Originally posted by Lara Joelle Kent: I'll hold you to that.
To all other readers and feedback-givers: Once the next chapter is posted, we will let DC wait as long for feedback as we have to wait for a new chapter... If that doesn't work to shorten the posting intervals, I don't know what will. Also, now that I think about it...isn't this a form of cyber-bullying? <author has never been good at standing up to bullies and will likely bow down to this>
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Originally posted by Deadly Chakram: Also, now that I think about it...isn't this a form of cyber-bullying?
<author has never been good at standing up to bullies and will likely bow down to this>
I agree. Let's not bully DC, otherwise she might be too nervous, anxious, or depressed to write and the story will never be finished. Then where would we be?
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Originally posted by Deadly Chakram: OMG! I had no idea you were capable of such evil, Lara!
It only shows you don't know me at all. Originally posted by Deadly Chakram:
Also, now that I think about it...isn't this a form of cyber-bullying? [Wink] Nah, let's call it a deal: You'll post more quickly, and we'll provide our FDK ASAP. (After all, one hand washes another.) Originally posted by VirginiaR:
I agree. Let's not bully DC, otherwise she might be too nervous, anxious, or depressed to write and the story will never be finished. Then where would we be?
It's not bullying if it's a deal.
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This is my first post, and I must say that I was leery at first but found myself pulled in immediately. I to thought that Kal-el and Lois would bump into each other while on his town romp. I agree with having them meet and Kal el being blown away with Lois' beauty. Keep it up....love it!!!!!
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Originally posted by VirginiaR: Originally posted by Deadly Chakram: [b]Also, now that I think about it...isn't this a form of cyber-bullying? <author has never been good at standing up to bullies and will likely bow down to this>  Does it help that I started Chapter 18 last night?
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Originally posted by Lara Joelle Kent: </font><blockquote><font size="1" face="Verdana, Helvetica, sans-serif">quote:</font><hr /><font size="2" face="Verdana, Helvetica, sans-serif">Originally posted by Deadly Chakram:
<strong>OMG! I had no idea you were capable of such evil, Lara!
It only shows you don't know me at all. Originally posted by Deadly Chakram:
Also, now that I think about it...isn't this a form of cyber-bullying? [Wink] Nah, let's call it a deal: You'll post more quickly, and we'll provide our FDK ASAP. (After all, one hand washes another.) Originally posted by VirginiaR:
I agree. Let's not bully DC, otherwise she might be too nervous, anxious, or depressed to write and the story will never be finished. Then where would we be?
It's not bullying if it's a deal. <chains self to laptop to finish>
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Also, now that I think about it...isn't this a form of cyber-bullying? Silly, DC. That's not cyber-bullying. That's extortion. Loved this chapter. We get to see Kal a little bit more for who he really is (thank goodness!) and learn a little bit more about each of them. Can't wait to finally meet Lois (and to hear what sort of biting comments she has ready and waiting for Lord Kal And possibly insulting the necklace)! No time for any more comments (it's Zumba time! ), but still a great chapter!  Please update soon. The sooner the updates arrive, the sooner I post longer comments!
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Originally posted by Janedoe23: This is my first post, and I must say that I was leery at first but found myself pulled in immediately.
I to thought that Kal-el and Lois would bump into each other while on his town romp.
I agree with having them meet and Kal el being blown away with Lois' beauty.
Keep it up....love it!!!!! First off, welcome to the boards! Congrats on your first post. I'm honored that it's on my story. Glad that it could pull you in right away. Don't worry, Kal is definitely going to be affected by his bride! 
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Oooh! Mouse is here! Thank you kindly. I hope not to let you down with Lois' reaction to...well...everything. Have fun at Zumba! <is too uncoordinated for Zumba>
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<reads fine print> Huh. Nothing about sex in here.  Right. Make her pierce them even if she doesn't want to? Well... kind of. I figured, he'd just stick them into her earlobes for her, being the nice man that he is Michael
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