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Originally posted by Lara Joelle Kent: Very nice chapter. However, I'm really curious as to what is going to happen to fill the next twelve or so chapters. Lex kidnaps Lois? Lois has to take care of her parents' estate because her father suddenly died? Nor starts a war that leaves a strain on the El family (by probably killing Jor-El and Ching, with Zara pregnant and Kal being the regent for his unborn nephew)?
Oh, and for those who run out of graemlins, there ![[Linked Image]](http://cosgan.de/images/midi/frech/k030.gif) is a whole site full of them - and you can use as many as you want. (I think...)
ETA: Click graemlin for link... Ooh! Excellent site, thanks! ![[Linked Image]](http://cosgan.de/images/smilie/verschiedene/p065.gif) Lots of stuff to come in the next chapters. Some good, some not. I don't want to spoil it.  And there is a *slight* chance that this may go to 21 chapters.
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Originally posted by Deadly Chakram:
And there is a *slight* chance that this may go to 21 chapters. Those darn characters! Mine never do what I want either!  You tell them left at the Lex Luthor, but NO! they want to plow right into him. /Pst. Lara Joelle Kent! You are evil! That site is TOOOO addicting! ![[Linked Image]](http://cosgan.de/images/midi/figuren/a110.gif)
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Originally posted by VirginiaR: Originally posted by Deadly Chakram:
[b]And there is a *slight* chance that this may go to 21 chapters.
/Pst. Lara Joelle Kent! You are evil! That site is TOOOO addicting!
[/b]This happens almost every single time I let my muse run amok on her own, unsupervised. Granted, it usually works out for the better...
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You mean, bust a pillow in sexual frustration, right? I was going for the push-ups, giving Lois an eye-full. Ha! Poor Kal could *really* use that handbook right about now... /imagines Kal going ![[Linked Image]](http://cosgan.de/images/smilie/konfus/k045.gif) ![[Linked Image]](http://cosgan.de/images/smilie/konfus/g065.gif) Jor-El should probably watch his back... Laced with mood enhancers? I thought you aren't supposed to mix alcohol and drugs? "No, I have no idea how he managed to fall face first into the water and not save himself." Indeed. ![[Linked Image]](http://www.thescifiworld.net/img/smilies/stargate/tealc2/tealc_newanime012.gif) Oh dear. <offers medication to help with the withdrawal symptoms, and wonders what will happen when this story is finished> Umm...what do you mean 'finished'?  . . . Duh! You mean, when you start posting the sequel about their honeymoon roadtrip where Kal and Lois visit Earth.   Michael
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I was going for the push-ups, giving Lois an eye-full. I know you were.  Jor-El should probably watch his back... Oh look! He bought some armor! ![[Linked Image]](http://cosgan.de/images/smilie/figuren/e075.gif) I thought you aren't supposed to mix alcohol and drugs? <whistles innocently> Umm...what do you mean 'finished'? As in...no more. Duh! You mean, when you start posting the sequel about their honeymoon roadtrip where Kal and Lois visit Earth. Hadn't planned on one.  But you never know what my muse might come up with next.
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Battle On,
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Oh, and for those who run out of graemlins, there is a whole site full of them - and you can use as many as you want. Yes! Endless gremlins! A perfect way to waste my time! These are for you, Lara. ![[Linked Image]](http://cosgan.de/images/midi/liebe/k020.gif) On to the story! he checked up on the current news before making a move against his brothers in a game that he had going with them. /imagines a high stakes risk game where Kal and his brothers are literally taking over planets/ He felt like singing and dancing, his heart was so light. Suddenly, the halls are full of people singing oddly Disney-like songs as Kal sings about his feelings.  Lois couldn't possibly take back all the things that she had said last night, could she? Why, yes. Yes she could. "Mom," he finally said, "I don't know if you had anything to do with Lois' change of heart last night. But if you did, then thank you. Just remember that when you find out Lois heard you crying to your mommy the night before. As he neared his chambers, he saw Ching and Jai approaching. Nooooooooo! ![[Linked Image]](http://cosgan.de/images/smilie/frech/s075.gif) "You're looking rather...happy this morning," Ching observed, grinning from ear to ear. "How did you manage that one?" Jai asked, his jaw slack in disbelief. "Something called makeup sex. I don't know. Lois seemed to like it." Kal shrugged. "I didn't do anything. It was all Lois. I'm sure that didn't make her happy. Having to do all the work.  Perfect! But she kept gravitating to a roan stallion, Kent. Kal smiled when it appeared that Lois had made her choice. Lois wants to ride Kent! Oh, the freudian irony! "Kent's a good choice," he commented. "He's got a very even personality. And he's one fast horse. He's about the only one here that can keep up with my Chief." By the end of the day, Kal was certain of one fact. It made his knees weak, his head spin, and his heart pound. He'd never experienced such feelings in all of his life. He'd never thought that he ever would. But it was true. Impossible, perhaps. But true.
He was in love with his wife. Aaaawwwwwww!!! ![[Linked Image]](http://cosgan.de/images/midi/liebe/a010.gif) Great chapter! Can't wait for more on Sunday!
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Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! That was so sweet. Nice job. I am looking forward to more. Laura
Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”
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/imagines a high stakes risk game where Kal and his brothers are literally taking over planets/ "I figured now that I know you've stopped stalking me, I could go back to visit Catira." <chokes on tea> I like that Jor-El is taking note of Kal's emotions like this, just watching innocently from the sidelines. Oh lord, Kal really *has* been reading from the Necronomicon again. <arms the palace staff with chainsaws and "boomsticks."> Lois wants to ride Kent! Oh, the freudian irony!  <author is responible for all evil thoughts running through the readers' heads> Great chapter! Can't wait for more on Sunday! Thank you! I'm really looking forward to getting the next chapter up, to be perfectly honest.
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Originally posted by Laurach:
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! That was so sweet. Nice job. I am looking forward to more. Laura Thanks so much, Laura! I hope you enjoy the next chapter just as much. I really loved writing that one.
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I was out of town for one week and now I have 3 chapters to read. WONDERFUL! That part was so sweet : Lois and Kal are falling for each other ... and Fasa was here. And my favorite quote: "Kent's a good choice," he commented. "He's got a very even personality Very funny And now the next part
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Originally posted by Sydney: I was out of town for one week and now I have 3 chapters to read. WONDERFUL!
That part was so sweet : Lois and Kal are falling for each other ... and Fasa was here.
And my favorite quote:
"Kent's a good choice," he commented. "He's got a very even personality
And now the next part Hey! Thanks! Lucky you with so many chapters to read all at once.
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