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Originally posted by Morgana:
Greetings!

This part was very heartfelt!

Clark reviving from a too long nap, happy to see his bride at his side.

Lux and sons doomed to have their molecules scattered throughout the galaxy. What a fitting execution to men who were so callous to others. It figures Clark was not happy to see them lose their lives, he is a compassionate man, which serves him well.

Sharing the duties of Supreme Lord? Interesting.

Loved the candlelight vigil! I saw the Queen and that was one of the most touching scenes in the film; the British people paying tribute to their fallen princess. Happily Clark is still with the good people of Krypton.

There was so much to long about this very long segment. All I can really say is: Well done! party
Thank you very much, Morgana! It was a satisfying chapter to write. Glad you enjoyed it. Things certainly are looking up for Kal, aren't they? And the people really love him.

More to come soon!


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Kal felt himself slogging through a wasteland of darkness that tried to hold him back, as if he were stuck in some thick, invisible sap that weighed down every movement he attempted to make.
Oh dear. Did he get sent to some Steven Kingequse afterlife?

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In fact, the monotony was so intense, so completely uniform that after a while, he began to wonder if he was actually moving at all, or if he was somehow stuck in place, like some unseen treadmill.
Maybe he’s stuck in a sensory deprivation chamber as punishment for running away? And attacking Nor (a fellow noble) without provocation.

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silently pleading for some shred of evidence that his loved ones were safe.
Well, they’re not here with him in the afterlife. So, either they’ve gone to Kryptonian Heaven or they’re still alive. Or afterlife is unlike anything the holy books have talked about.

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Eventually, he felt his entire body grow lighter, and his feet seemed to lift right off the ground, though there was no way of knowing for sure.
Is he in suspended hibernation, on his way to Earth?

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He felt relieved too, as if his body were floating to the surface after spending too much time underwater. Up and up he went, faster and faster until at last he felt that surely he could not go any higher.
Will he die of nitrogen poisoning?

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he came to realize that that wasn't where he was now. Gradually, he became aware of the feather softness beneath him; a warm, comfortable bed.
They’re not allowed to try a noble man without him being healthy and strong.

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He was greeted with a tightly balled mass of purring orange fur.
So, back at Lux Manor, since Nor had Fasa stolen, too. Also, I do keep imagining Garfield. Is that bad?

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Beyond the sleeping cat, Kal could see the large windows in the chamber.
I just realized. With his being lower than the curtain walls, or the trees surrounding the palace, Kal has had a very limited view of the world until he snuck out for the first time.

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The moons were the wrong shapes. And the stars were in the wrong positions.
Earth? Other side of Krytpon? Fortress of Solitude in the Lonesome Mountains?

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There was no way this was the same night.
he’s quite observant for someone recovering from a concussion. Even if he spent his youth counting stars instead of playing with concubines.

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She was slumped forward, her upper torso sprawled across the thick emerald green comforter.
Oh dear, they killed her and left her body for Kal to find!

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She was slumped forward, her upper torso sprawled across the thick emerald green comforter.
eek No wonder he’s feeling so crappy. He’s covered in Kryptonite threads.

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At last, he attained his goal. His hand brushed her soft cheek, felt the warmth of her perfect skin.
Awwww

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Kal winced against the volume of Lois' cry. He'd had headaches before, but none quite like this.
See? A loud-voiced Lois is worse than a handover.

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He wondered how badly he'd been injured in the fight with Nor.
He’s non-functioning from the waist down.

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But his thoughts scattered as, one after another, as his family entered the room. Jor-El, Ching, Zara, Jai, even Samm Lyne
Where’s Luci? Oh, right. She’s taking care of her own husband.

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They all filed into his room, each of them looking as though the weight of the world had just been lifted from their shoulders.
Nah, they just want to know who won the bet.

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He patted his father's back with his good hand, trying to dispel the last of the Supreme Lord's worries.
And at last, Jor-El truly believed that his son would be fit enough again to stand trial.

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"Here," Samm said, offering him a small white pill. "Take this. It should help some."
Oooooh! Milk of the Poppy, coagulated and pressed into form.

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"Your skull is fractured," Jor-El said, sitting down in the chair Lois had been sound asleep in.
Yeah, this version seems to have a much less thick skull than our Clark.

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"And some of the ligaments in your knee were torn."
/imagines leg nearly torn off at the knee.

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All the scans I did couldn't tell us much, in terms of whether your brain had suffered any injuries itself.
Brain? Right, this is is said to have one.

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I thought I could handle Nor on my own."
And he would have, had he brought a gun to a fist fight.

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"We're fine. Ruce took a bullet in his shoulder, but he's fine.
/imagines scene from The Jackal with Bruce Willies./ But this time, it’s just a flesh wound.

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"It really wasn't that big of a deal," she protested.

"Are you kidding?" Zara asked, beaming proudly at her surrogate sister.
Hush, Zara. Lois just got Kal to see her as a sweet wife and sexual being. Don’t want to tear open old wounds of her being an amazon.

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"I couldn't just leave you to fight Nor all on your own," Lois said, her words spilling out in a rush.
She wanted to have fun, too.

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"What about Bil's men? Did they...did they get out safely?"

Samm and Jor-El exchanged a weighted look. Neither one seemed willing to speak.
Not all of them. We’re still looking through Biter’s stomach to figure out just who got eaten and who deserted.

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He thought that maybe it already had, as he saw Lois fairly beam with pride at her father's words.
Duh! She saved her important husband and thus her marriage.

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"I feel kind of like a robot."
/whispers/ Cyborg.

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. She and the guards went into your rooms, only to find that you were not there. She came to me in a panic."
That’s why he should have left a note that he and Ruce went to town to have some fun.

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"Dad," Kal said after a moment of silence. "I'm so sorry. You gave me direct orders to stay within my chambers. I went and deliberately disobeyed you.
jawdrop That’s right. That’s…that’s…*treason*! He’s going to be going away for a long time.

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They acted rashly and they got themselves caught.
So, culling the herd?

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"And Lux planned to kill you and take Lois as his own wife."
See? Lois would have been safe. She’d have been the next Supreme Lady of Krytpon.

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To imagine that...that sadistic criminal being married to Lois was enough to make Kal ill.
Now now, Kal. There’s no proof of Lux being sadistic. And he has not yet been convicted, so it’s *alleged* criminal.

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"Lux and his sons are safely locked away in the city jail, under heavy guard.
/imagines wooden shack with rotten walls, guarded by someone like Dogberry.

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"And Jen Mai?" Kal asked. "He was there, at Lux Manor. I saw him. Did we get him too?"
“Yes. He told us everything. Can you imagine? He was there *undercover* helping us all the time. He even told us that he pointed the two of you in the right direction. Good thing he recognized you despite all the makeup. We’re going to promote him to Chief of the Elders for his service.”


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"So he gives us all the information he knows, and in return, he gets to live out his days in prison," Kal said, finishing his father's thought.
/imagines country club prison with a gold course, cricket, concubines, and a five star restaurant/

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He says that the missing women from the Uthors' estate were killed, and their bodies vaporized."
Okay? So? Lux is going to be ratted anyway.

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"Right. He also swears that Ara Caln did not die of natural causes. He insists that Lux poisoned his late wife."
Again, so?

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Had he actually almost defended that monster?
Well, it’s good manners.

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"But remember, there are toxins out there that can simulate a heart attack
potassium chloride?

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Ara Caln had always been an independent, opinionated woman.
/senses a pattern/ Lux is just like a kid with a new toy. And when the shiny newness has been rubbed off, a gets frustrated and puts it away.

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With a sinking feeling, Kal knew that everything he loved about Lois would have gotten her killed as well, if Lux had taken her for a wife.
hyper

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Oh dear. Did he get sent to some Steven Kingequse afterlife?
*Just* a coma.

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Maybe he’s stuck in a sensory deprivation chamber as punishment for running away? And attacking Nor (a fellow noble) without provocation.
Ooh, now that sounds evil. clap

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Yeah, this version seems to have a much less thick skull than our Clark.
<nods>

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/imagines leg nearly torn off at the knee.
eek

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Brain? Right, this is is said to have one.
Well, something has to tell his body to keep breathing.

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And he would have, had he brought a gun to a fist fight.
Yes, but then chances are Ching and the others would be dead.

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Hush, Zara. Lois just got Kal to see her as a sweet wife and sexual being. Don’t want to tear open old wounds of her being an amazon.
But...Kal might *like* Lois in a skimpy loincloth-type outfit!

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She wanted to have fun, too.
Lois (thinking to self): "Well, I *was* the only competant person there."

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Not all of them. We’re still looking through Biter’s stomach to figure out just who got eaten and who deserted.
clap

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Duh! She saved her important husband and thus her marriage.
Yes, now Samm doesn't have to take her back home with him.

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/whispers/ Cyborg.
AntiK said the *same* thing!

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That’s why he should have left a note that he and Ruce went to town to have some fun.
He did. Jor-El just missed it. It said: "Dear Dad, Off w/Ruce to save the day. BRB. ~ Kal. PS - Am aware is suicide mission."

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That’s right. That’s…that’s…*treason*! He’s going to be going away for a long time.
<hears Jor-El discussing the Phantom Zone with Samm> eek

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See? Lois would have been safe. She’d have been the next Supreme Lady of Krytpon.
For about a day and a half.

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Now now, Kal. There’s no proof of Lux being sadistic. And he has not yet been convicted, so it’s *alleged* criminal.
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“Yes. He told us everything. Can you imagine? He was there *undercover* helping us all the time. He even told us that he pointed the two of you in the right direction. Good thing he recognized you despite all the makeup. We’re going to promote him to Chief of the Elders for his service.”
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/imagines country club prison with a gold course, cricket, concubines, and a five star restaurant/
<taxpayers grumble>

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Okay? So? Lux is going to be ratted anyway.
Something about justice and closure for the victims' families... clap

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Sounds like he’s getting better.
*All* of him.

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Oh, look, part 20 *and* 21 are already up
Indeed!


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Ooh, now that sounds evil.
Actually, now that you mention it, I think Teeeeej once stuck Lois in such a chamber on Krypton. For hitting a noble man.

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*This* would be the kitty in question:
goofy

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<taxpayers grumble>
/sends terror troopers/ Hmm... /sends short-grown terror troopers since peasant hovels usually don't have that high a ceiling and we wouldn't want to have the Death Star incident all over again/

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Something about justice and closure for the victims' families...
So, 100% certainly over reasonable certainty is worth keeping Jen Mai alive? No wonder they're in such a dire situation.

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OMG! Jor-El is Ned Stark!
No. Ned wouldn't chock his sons' heads off. Stannis on the other hand...

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You may.
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Sooo...Winter Is Coming?
No, spring. Erm... winter? Erm... Winter is Staying!

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She has the best medicine?
Eeeee

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"He's alive! Thank Rao! Now we can finish turning Lois' room into another lab for me!"
Ellen: "Now I'll never see Samm again..."

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So, Ruce will have to save them with the help of an unbelievably bright sunrise backlighting him?
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Actually, now that you mention it, I think Teeeeej once stuck Lois in such a chamber on Krypton. For hitting a noble man.
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Point taken.
laugh

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/sends terror troopers/ Hmm... /sends short-grown terror troopers since peasant hovels usually don't have that high a ceiling and we wouldn't want to have the Death Star incident all over again/
clap

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So, 100% certainly over reasonable certainty is worth keeping Jen Mai alive? No wonder they're in such a dire situation.
Well, read on.

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No. Ned wouldn't chock his sons' heads off. Stannis on the other hand...
But...he didn't father any shadow-demon babies!

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No, spring. Erm... winter? Erm... Winter is Staying!
Krypton Remembers.

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Ellen: "No I'll never see Samm again..."
Don't you mean "*Yes*, I'll never see Samm again!" ???


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Arg... Should have been "now" not "no"

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Originally posted by Darth Michael:
Arg... Should have been "now" not "no"

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He is. Except for the fact that's a Twilight book. <shudder> Yes, I read them to see what the hype was. No, I *still* don't get it.
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OMG! eek clap rotflol


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