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Okay! This is turning into an origin epic for the JLA. More please!!!

Oh, wow, that was unexpected. (And I'm very much looking forward to either Lois or Clark paying Vicky back for her prank. Probably Lois...) So, the world's finest are going to collaborate now instead of trying to spill the beans on one another, huh? Interesting twist.

Reap what you sow there, Lois. Honey & feathers. Another time Lois should have listened to Clark, and DIDN'T. She will learn eventually, right? Well, I mean, not in one of your stories, LLF, but eventually, right?

I figured that Bruce would have Vicki's desk bugged (or computer) to know about hackers. Yep, Lois you walked into that one. What is she and Jimmy up to? I'm surprised that Clark isn't more curious. I'm sure he will be after he heard about people targeting superheroes.

So, Bruce knows about Clark. Clark knows about Bruce. They're getting along and soon we'll have a catfight on our hands with the ladies. <<shakes head>> Or is Bruce no longer dating Vicki and is going after Selina, which is why he followed her to Coast City. Or did he follow her because he knew Hal Jordan lives there?

Lois is just going to get herself in trouble, isn't she? Oh, wait, that's just a given.

Poor Hal. What's he doing taking off his Green Lantern ring? Bad Boy! Lucky thing that the ring only works for him. And that Catwoman only stole the ring not the ring recharger. Bruce knows his and Flash's secret identities too. Two + Two + Two points for Batman's superstar genius power, or maybe just his detective abilities. Somebody's going to be in trouble after making all these guys MAD. Do they really want the JL to form and come after them? Does someone really liked to be beaten up or something? Masochistic or something?

I knew Joker was captured too easily. Something's up with the Gotham baddies. Bane No wonder he's known for beating up Batman / Bruce to the point of death. (sorry if I've ruined the plot of this summer's blockbuster... but, hey, I've only seen the previews.) He sounds like a scarey dude. I hope we WON'T be seeing more of him. <<bites fingernails>>

So, what's going on? Where is this all leading?? As always, you've got me on the edge of my seat.

Ooh. An interesting twist- targetting superheros. Do the villains know the secret identities then? And why do I get the feeling that Lois and Vicki are going to get in major trouble together?

I have an idea about what Lois wants Jimmy to send her... maybe something to do with Godzilla?

Uh-oh... someone is targeting superheroes. Who would have such hubris?

Thanks for the feedback. If all goes well, a new chapter should be posted today.

Lois honeyed and feathered? Actually I'm on Vicki's side. Lois was needless cruel to her while she worked at the Daily Planet as a photograhper! She was never a threat to Lois.

Gotham is her city and Batman her superhero to track. Lois and Clark are out of their balliwick.

Should be interesting to see where this all leads to....