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I hope everyone is bundled up ... we're hitting the slopes! And with this part, we're also moving to an every other day posting schedule ... see you Tuesday!

All comments much appreciated.

Kathy

Is that what it's like to go skiing? What have I been waiting for all those years?

Kathy, I couldn't find one line here that I might have suggested because I don't know anything about skiing except that it happens on snow, in mountains, in the cold and that there are some really nice ski chalets around with warm fires and nice warm drinks.

So the credit for this lovely section (and probably the next since they have to get downhill--according to Newton's Laws anyway) all goes to you.

gerry

sweet and waffy and I *love* Lois's way of helping Clark with his claustrophobia <g> And now I'm hungry for french toast!

PJ

Very clever and devious, oh great and gifted writer. You ply the gentle readers with all this waff and cute banter. You lull them into that warm glow of contentment. That all is right in the world of Lois and Clark. What a perfect set up... for the big WHAM!

I wonder who skies off the edge of the cliff first. Lois? then Clark has to blow his secret in order to try and save her. Or maybe Clark, in his inexperience clumsily goes over the edge and Lois thinks that he's killed. No Hamilton to put him back together this time.

Waiting with gleeful anticipation for the nasty whams to commence.

Tank (who knows that Kathy wouldn't let him down with just more happy, happy waffy junk)

Hi,

Great part.

He is delaying to tell Lois the truth.

More ASAP, please.

MAF

This is sooooo good! Don't listen to Tank! We don't need no stinkin' A plot!

Jen
(who's feeling even colder than she was after reading about snow...)

Used to go skiing with my husband (well him skiing, me waiting in the hot tub for his return) Hmmmmm, maybe I should have actually gone skiing with him if that's what it was like. But the hot tub was great, too. And, am expecting nothing less than that when the two hit the tub.

Unless you *are* going to let the A plot hold them up a bit. That's okay if it makes the return to the room better.

Barb.

If she keeps avoiding to talk about Superman whenever Clark brings up the subject I wonder if he'll ever find the courage to come right out and just tell her!

When they were in bed together, did he keep his glasses on, all the time? Wouldn't she recognize Superman, so up close and personal?

Love the ski stories and the way Lois helps Clark to get to the top.

Ursie

OK, playgroup's over and so is lunch, so now I get a few minutes to respond to your generous comments.

Maria said:
Oh, wow, and with the steaming mad face, too! Yes, you're right, he is ... but that's not totally his fault. He keeps trying, really he does! She just has other ideas.

As Ursie says:
She's sure making it hard, isn't she!

Hmm, good question. My intent was that he didn't take his glasses off until the lights were turned out -- remember, she says they cuddled and talked late into the night in the dark. She might be able to see him, a little, as her eyes adjusted, but not enough to really associate him with Superman, especially if his hair is mussed, etc. And the reason it wasn't mentioned specifically about him taking them off is because we were in Lois's POV for this scene and she didn't find it odd that he wouldn't take them off until they were all ready for bed, so it's not anything she'd dwell on. Does that work for you?

LOL, Jen! Glad to hear it. And if it's lack of a-plot you like, hopefully you'll enjoy the rest of the story since there ain't one anywhere to be seen in this one.

Thanks everyone! I'm glad you're reading and I appreciate the comments very much.

Kathy