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FDK: How the Ball Rolls #94716 04/23/13 08:12 AM
Joined: Jun 2012 Posts: 133 Washington C chickberry OP Hack from Nowheresville
OP chickberry Hack from Nowheresville C Joined: Jun 2012 Posts: 133 Washington	comments? "You're better at this than I thought," she told him. "At what?" Clark looked up at her quizzically. "Dissembling." "You didn't think I could lie?" ~ Sue s. FB

Re: FDK: How the Ball Rolls #94717 04/23/13 02:27 PM
Joined: Mar 2013 Posts: 624 US M mrsMxyzptlk Columnist
mrsMxyzptlk Columnist M Joined: Mar 2013 Posts: 624 US	Cute story. I like that you show Lois having interests outside of work. "It is a remarkable dichotomy. In many ways, Clark is the most human of us all. Then...he shoots fire from the skies, and it is difficult not to think of him as a god. And how fortunate we all are that it does not occur to him." -Batman (in Superman/Batman #3 by Jeph Loeb)

Re: FDK: How the Ball Rolls #94718 04/23/13 03:16 PM
Joined: Aug 2012 Posts: 2,549 Detroit, Michigan J John Lambert Pulitzer
John Lambert Pulitzer J Joined: Aug 2012 Posts: 2,549 Detroit, Michigan	This was a fun story. It makes sense Clark would like footy since he spent some time in Australia for that article he showed Perry. John Pack Lambert

Re: FDK: How the Ball Rolls #94719 04/24/13 04:51 AM
Joined: Apr 2011 Posts: 9,509 USA VirginiaR Nobel Peace Prize Winner
VirginiaR Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2011 Posts: 9,509 USA	I like the new changes you made since my last read-through. VirginiaR. "On the long road, take small steps." -- Jor-el, "The Foundling" --- "clearly there is a lack of understanding between those two... he speaks Lunkheadanian and she Stubbornanian" -- chelo.

Re: FDK: How the Ball Rolls #94720 04/24/13 12:40 PM
Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,800 Likes: 30 Somewhere on the East Coast Morgana Pulitzer
Morgana Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,800 Likes: 30 Somewhere on the East Coast	Cute story. There is more here to be explored. Perhaps a sequel? Morgana A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.

Re: FDK: How the Ball Rolls #94721 04/26/13 10:05 AM
Joined: Jun 2012 Posts: 133 Washington C chickberry OP Hack from Nowheresville
OP chickberry Hack from Nowheresville C Joined: Jun 2012 Posts: 133 Washington	Thanks everyone for reading. Quote I like the new changes you made since my last read-through. Thanks Virginia. I have Ken to thank for most of them. He pointed out a couple things I missed. Quote Cute story. There is more here to be explored. Perhaps a sequel? I didn't plan on a sequel but there could be something there. I've got a a few other stories to finish up first. "You're better at this than I thought," she told him. "At what?" Clark looked up at her quizzically. "Dissembling." "You didn't think I could lie?" ~ Sue s. FB

Re: FDK: How the Ball Rolls #94722 12/26/13 09:13 AM
Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 9,066 Likes: 31 Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner
Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 9,066 Likes: 31	Hi chickberry! Am working my way back through the year Quote Foreclosing on people whose mortgages were current, selling the homes quickly, and then settling with those former home-owners for pennies on the dollar as compensation for the bank’s mistake. That doesn’t sound legal… Quote They had been fortunate that somehow Clark had heard a group of guards heading towards the stairwell they were in as they were making their climb up. Uh-huh. Quote They quickly had exited onto the nearest floor and found an office left unlocked. Let me guess…Clark found it? Quote Lois ignored his plea. “You have something to do tomorrow night? Like what, a hot date? I know Linda left town, so is it Toni? Did she get out on bail and give you a call even though you turned her in?” Quote Before the maid could interrupt, Lois abruptly stood up out of her chair and walked over to examine the ficus. The air around her was getting a little too warm. She needed space to cool down her thoughts and refocus on getting Clark to open up. Michael Join us on the #loisclark Discord server! We talk about fanfic, our favorite show, life, and more! (It’s almost like the IRC days of old again!) I go by Michael on the Archives.

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