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FDK - Cooking Class (6/7) #95982 06/19/13 01:23 PM
Joined: Dec 2008 Posts: 2,181 Likes: 29 SW Vic, Australia Female Hawk OP Kerth
OP Female Hawk Kerth Joined: Dec 2008 Posts: 2,181 Likes: 29 SW Vic, Australia	Thanks to everyone who has left feedback for this story. Sorry I'm so horribly behind in replying. I thought you'd want the next part more than my replies. Corrina.

Re: FDK - Cooking Class (6/7) #95983 06/19/13 01:58 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,837 California fly-over country Artemis Pulitzer
Artemis Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,837 California fly-over country	Oh, that was so sweet. Good work. Artemis History is easy once you've lived it. - Duncan MacLeod Writing history is easy once you've lived it. - Artemis

Re: FDK - Cooking Class (6/7) #95984 06/19/13 01:58 PM
Joined: Aug 2012 Posts: 2,549 Detroit, Michigan J John Lambert Pulitzer
John Lambert Pulitzer J Joined: Aug 2012 Posts: 2,549 Detroit, Michigan	That Clark managed to convince Lois to let him stay. It is slightly surprising that she has not focused more on his hearing her cry. I love the dialogue. that they are getting to share this meal they worked to make. Clark should be glad he chose to make kisses now. John Pack Lambert

Re: FDK - Cooking Class (6/7) #95985 06/19/13 02:26 PM
Joined: May 2003 Posts: 104 Michigan S sarah Hack from Nowheresville
sarah Hack from Nowheresville S Joined: May 2003 Posts: 104 Michigan	Okay you redeemed yourself after having Lois ask Clark to leave. LOVED this part. The mix of sweet and sexy I thought was perfect for the characters. Although I have never known Lois to turn down chocolate before. Maybe they will be chocolate covered Clark kisses ?!? Can't wait for the last (sniff sniff) part. Sarah www.zazzle.com/designsbyhebert

Re: FDK - Cooking Class (6/7) #95986 06/19/13 04:32 PM
Joined: Jul 2003 Posts: 3,060 Likes: 20 Florida Queen of the Capes Pulitzer
Queen of the Capes Pulitzer Joined: Jul 2003 Posts: 3,060 Likes: 20 Florida	Ooooooooh, I just melted into a puddle of goo, over here. This was wonderful! ~•~

Re: FDK - Cooking Class (6/7) #95987 06/20/13 12:34 AM
Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,800 Likes: 30 Somewhere on the East Coast Morgana Pulitzer
Morgana Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,800 Likes: 30 Somewhere on the East Coast	Banter. Good, intelligent and well written old-fashioned banter. The sign of an intelligent and talented writer. It was almost like watching a couple through a window that allowed for sight and sound. I was a little embarrassed peeking in on such an intimate dinner. The description of the meal itself was too divine to be ignored, I was so anxious to take a bite that my mouth was watering. Have you cooked such a dish yourself? Because from the delightfully skillful manner in which the preparations were written, it sounds like this recipe is a family favorite. Speaking for myself, thank you for letting me attend this cooking lesson! Last part coming up...sigh. Morgana A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.

Re: FDK - Cooking Class (6/7) #95988 06/20/13 02:58 AM
Joined: Jun 2010 Posts: 1,200 Boston, MA mozartmaid Top Banana
mozartmaid Top Banana Joined: Jun 2010 Posts: 1,200 Boston, MA	Delicious and oh so sensual! Yum! Reach for the moon, for even if you fail, you'll still land among the stars... and who knows? Maybe you'll meet Superman along the way.

Re: FDK - Cooking Class (6/7) #95989 06/20/13 05:46 AM
Joined: Mar 2013 Posts: 624 US M mrsMxyzptlk Columnist
mrsMxyzptlk Columnist M Joined: Mar 2013 Posts: 624 US	Woah! Clark gets a bit intense, doesn't he? And that doesn't scare Lois off? But I guess he's in love-at-first-sight, and she's extraordinarily impulsive. Besides, Clark just has this trustworthy vibe about him that Lois always falls for. I totally enjoyed the banter about kisses. I've got quite the chocolate craving now, thanks to you. "It is a remarkable dichotomy. In many ways, Clark is the most human of us all. Then...he shoots fire from the skies, and it is difficult not to think of him as a god. And how fortunate we all are that it does not occur to him." -Batman (in Superman/Batman #3 by Jeph Loeb)

Re: FDK - Cooking Class (6/7) #95990 06/20/13 07:06 AM
Joined: Jun 2011 Posts: 2,131 California Mouserocks Kerth
Mouserocks Kerth Joined: Jun 2011 Posts: 2,131 California	Woo-woo! Love this! The flirty banter was great, as was Clark insisting he stay for her. Just perfect! Can't wait to find out what happens next and yet I don't want the story to end... Nothing spoils a good story like the arrival of an eye witness. --Mark Twain

Re: FDK - Cooking Class (6/7) #95991 06/22/13 07:13 PM
Joined: Apr 2008 Posts: 377 USA S sarahg Beat Reporter
sarahg Beat Reporter S Joined: Apr 2008 Posts: 377 USA	love this! can't wait for the next part, and a sequel ;-)

Re: FDK - Cooking Class (6/7) #95992 06/23/13 08:01 AM
Joined: Jan 2010 Posts: 227 GA USA K KateB Hack from Nowheresville
KateB Hack from Nowheresville K Joined: Jan 2010 Posts: 227 GA USA	Great part, Corrina. KateB

Re: FDK - Cooking Class (6/7) #95993 06/23/13 05:49 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 4,058 NY Laurach Pulitzer
Laurach Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 4,058 NY	Awwww loved the whole scene More soon. Laura Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?” Caroline's "Stardust"

Re: FDK - Cooking Class (6/7) #95994 08/20/13 12:20 PM
Joined: Dec 2012 Posts: 188 MEXICO chelo Hack from Nowheresville
chelo Hack from Nowheresville Joined: Dec 2012 Posts: 188 MEXICO	Quote Clark's smile flickered. "Actually, I was thinking you should let me choose the woman for me to date." - Pick me!!! Pick me!!!! Quote Clark let her hand slide slowly from his grasp. "I'll be waiting for you," he said. - AAAAAAAAWWWWWW.......!!!!! Quote "You like chocolate?" he asked. "It's my favourite food." His smile came with soft satisfaction. "That's good." Unable to resist, Lois asked, "You're not going to ask if I like kisses?" Clark cleared his throat. "No," he said. "I'm not going to ask that." "Pity," she said. "Would I like the answer?" "Depends on whether you like kisses or not." - Teasing, Lois? Wooooooo!!! I see some kisses in your future!! I Love this couple!! Clark: "So what are you saying? I should go crawling back on my hands and knees?" Martha: "No, honey. Fly back. It's faster!!"

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