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FDK: Clark & Lois – When Worlds and Universes Collide - MMC V 8 16/36 #99192 02/14/14 04:23 AM
Joined: Jul 2010 Posts: 3,883 Pensacola, Florida KenJ OP Pulitzer
OP KenJ Pulitzer Joined: Jul 2010 Posts: 3,883 Pensacola, Florida	comments go here Herb replied, “My boy, I never say … impossible.” "Lois and Clarks" My stories can be found here kj

Re: FDK: Clark & Lois – When Worlds and Universes Collide - MMC V 8 16/36 #99193 02/15/14 02:37 AM
Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,800 Likes: 30 Somewhere on the East Coast Morgana Pulitzer
Morgana Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,800 Likes: 30 Somewhere on the East Coast	I am continued to be amazed at how so many different strands of your volumes are drawn together to make a comprehensive whole. Bravo! The discussion between the various Loises and Zara was a will hard to keep up with at first, but eventually I got the hang of it. My ONLY complaint: Quote Turning back to the other Loises, Lori said, “Okay, we have found that we girls, because we started out as Earth human, even though our physiology has been modified by the Kryptonian aura and we derive powers from the pendant, we are immune to green Kryptonite. The only problem is in the case of pregnancy. The baby is affected. I’ve been through it and believe me, it’s no picnic.” The above paragraph describes perfectly what these women have gone through and yet they refer to themselves as 'girls'? How old does a woman have to be before she is no longer a girl? Bring on the next part! Morgana A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.

Re: FDK: Clark & Lois – When Worlds and Universes Collide - MMC V 8 16/36 #99194 02/15/14 05:37 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,837 California fly-over country Artemis Pulitzer
Artemis Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,837 California fly-over country	“Okay, we have found that we girls, because we started out as Earth human, even though our physiology has been modified by the Kryptonian aura"etc vs. “Okay, we have found that we women, because we started out as Earth human, even though our physiology has been modified by the Kryptonian aura"etc Well, I've got to say from experience that in a group of women, I'd more more inclined to say "girls" than "women". Even though I have grandchildren, "women" are still my mother's age. Also, in this instance, there are really young women who are really "girls". So I had no objection to it when I beta'd. But, to each his or her own. We still say "Girls just want to have fun" not "Women just want to have fun." Artemis History is easy once you've lived it. - Duncan MacLeod Writing history is easy once you've lived it. - Artemis

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