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Story is Here . Thoughts? Comments? Tomatoes? 
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Oooooooh. That's evil.  Delightfully, so. I love it! I think what that time traveler needs though is a more aggressive Clark Kent in S1, and suddenly Utopia happens all the more quickly.  It would be ironic, wouldn't it?  Terrific!
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1/1?  Moving onward, a delightful tale but it cries out for sequels. If you don't want to write sequels perhaps you could post it as challenge.
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That was just a teaser! It is a beginning, please more. I like the idea of Clark knowing about the future and trying to change it to stop Luthor, a new challenge between them!!
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Great! Who knows how many times Tempus has rebooted history?
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Ah, Tempus. He never knows when to give up, does he? 
"Oh, you can’t help that," said the Cat: "we’re all mad here. I’m mad. You’re mad."
"How do you know I’m mad?" said Alice.
"You must be," said the Cat, "or you wouldn’t have come here.”
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Great! And so the story begins (again).... Yeah, Clark knowing the future could be a really interesting take on the season playing out Laura
"Where's Clark?" "Right here."
...two simple sentences--with so much meaning.
~Lois and Clark in 'House of Luthor'~
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Queenie! You always do this! Great one-shot!
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Thanks for the positive response, guys.  Originally posted by Framework4: 1/1?
Moving onward, a delightful tale but it cries out for sequels. If you don't want to write sequels perhaps you could post it as challenge. Originally posted by Annalina19:
That was just a teaser! It is a beginning, please more. I like the idea of Clark knowing about the future and trying to change it to stop Luthor, a new challenge between them!! I know it sort of...dangles. Sorry. To be honest, I just haven't had the time or energy for longer stories, and frankly, there are so many directions this could go in that perhaps a challenge is the best solution. Any takers?
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Nice story! If Clark keeps messing up, will Tempus keep rescuing him from the cage? I can see this as a sort of "Ground Hog's Day" loop.
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Hi Queenie! Hmm…wonder what that’s about… Tempus? Fates? ...and blinked as the space before his eyes shimmered.
A man stood in front of him, extending a hand. “Mr. Kent, come with me if you want to live.” Ooooh! ![[Linked Image]](http://31.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_kuwvingt7i1qzdyjxo1_500.png) “I'm a time-traveler,” the man told him, turning to retrieve the key. Tempus? “I can send you back,” the man continued. “You can do things right, this time; fix history so there's no cage, no wedding, and no sickening marriage with bratty kids.” So Tempus! The wedding, sickening marriage, and the bratty kids of course refer to Season 4 and beyond. Oh boy. ...and found himself shaking the firm grip of Perry White.
“Clark Kent, welcome to the Daily Planet.”
The Beginning/End  Michael
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