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#288667 04/04/21 07:42 PM
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Okay so this one is a random thought that came to me for the Kerth Challenge #2. I hope everyone enjoys. Alone at 7p.m

All comments are welcome.


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I always love fics like this, showing a glimpse of how he could have done things differently ^_^

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Love it!!


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Wish Clark had demonstrated a bit more of this courage on the show! Well written. Very nice reveal.

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Aww! Very cute! That is going to be some dinner conversation! What a first date!


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Awwww.... what a sweet way to get Lois' attention. Wonder how that conversation would have continued. love

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What a delightful tale, combining humor, a touch of mystery, romance, and fluff. Great diversion for what's going on in the world! Thanks for sharing.


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What a nice reveal. I like your take on the challenge. Thank you for sharing


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I love this. Wonderful - perfectly n character too.


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Hey Everyone wave

Thank you so much for the wonderful feedback. I promise I was not ignoring you. I was just recovering from the Kerths. wink I appreciate everyone taking the time to read and comment on this one shot. Glad everyone liked it.


Originally Posted by Blueowl
I always love fics like this, showing a glimpse of how he could have done things differently ^_^

Hey Blueowl,

Yes, me too! I love the world of what if and seeing where I can take our favorite characters.

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Love it!!

Aw, thanks Crazy_Babe!

Originally Posted by Penny_Lane
Wish Clark had demonstrated a bit more of this courage on the show! Well written. Very nice reveal.

/swoon/ I would have loved to have seen this kind of initiative from Clark. Thank you for reading and I'm glad you liked the reveal.

Originally Posted by Deadly Chakram
Aww! Very cute! That is going to be some dinner conversation! What a first date!

/rubs hands together/ You know that had to be some dinner conversation with him putting it all on the line like that, but at this point in their relationship they were friends and she'd already demonstrated she was trustworthy with keeping kryptonite a secret....A necessary change to hurry things along. Glad you liked the first date scene.

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Awwww.... what a sweet way to get Lois' attention. Wonder how that conversation would have continued. love
Hey Toomi8 wave

Thank you so much. I'm glad you liked this little twist.

Originally Posted by cuidadora
What a delightful tale, combining humor, a touch of mystery, romance, and fluff. Great diversion for what's going on in the world! Thanks for sharing.

Hey cuidadora, so glad you liked my little fluff piece.

Originally Posted by bakasi
What a nice reveal. I like your take on the challenge. Thank you for sharing

lol Thanks bakasi! So glad you liked this little twist on the challenge. Thanks for reading!

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I love this. Wonderful - perfectly n character too.

Hey L!

I haven't seen you in ages! :hug: Thanks for reading. I'm so glad you liked it.


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Oh wow! Loved this! Such a cute way for Clark to set up both a date and a revelation. *waffy sigh* awww!


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I was so delighted to read this charming and very well written "morsel" for our imagination. Even more heartwarming is having you back on the boards. I, personally, have missed you a great deal. dance

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I am ashamed to write that until today I never read this story and for the life of me, I don't know why! huh

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It terrified her and excited her but running away wasn’t an option.

Nope, running away is never an option when faced with such a decision. To love or not to love, that is the question.

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Her forehead creased as she shook her head, noticing as he removed his hand rested on the brim of his glasses, seeming to hesitate for a moment. “You…Clark, come on. No, you didn’t, Superman…” realization dawned on her as he removed his glasses for the first time and set them on the table in front of him, “did.” Every doubt and question she’d had seemed to answer itself as she stared into his unfiltered eyes for the first time, merging the image of Clark and Superman as one. In that final moment, she let out a shallow breath and folded her arms across her chest, “I guess we have a lot to talk about.”

Best reveal. Short. Simple. To the point. With a touch of romance of course!


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I'm chiming in a bit late for the game: I love this story. It positively exudes WAFFYness.

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Hi Valerie!

I’m working through 2021 and 2022…

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Though somehow, the closer they became, the more aware she found herself of his presence.
Awww, she misses her Clarkie Bear.

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She spun around to see Clark Kent standing behind her with his other hand extended, handing her a coffee.
Two places at once indeed. But he just got her newsroom coffee, not coffee stand coffee. That’s lazy of him. I’m sure her plants will notice the drop-off in quality.

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She had her suspicions from the way Superman had insisted on her using the phone that it had been more his idea than theirs.
SUPERMAN: I need a practical mad-dog tag. She always runs off and I spend hours trying to find her again.
(Coincidentally, this shopping list of Clark’s is where the rumors about Krypto the Super Dog got started.)

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I thought…” Lois gestured to the phone in hand. “I thought that was for emergencies.” Clark reached for the phone,
Worried that he’d ring?

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pointing at the blinking light. “It looks like you have a message.” “No, it just needs to charge,” Lois sighed, reaching for the charging cord from her purse only for Clark to flip the mobile phone open and reveal the blinking message on the screen. “Or not.”
Cheat!

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“Well, they messaged you on the phone S.T.A.R. Labs gave you. I’m sure it’s important.” Clark replied confidently.
Didn’t the weather guy with the hologram work for S.T.A.R. Labs?

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Her relationship with Clark had been kicked into high gear over the last month when he’d first asked her out,
Time coordinates!

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The more recent close call with Dianna Stride, assassin and tabloid reporter from Top Copy, had left them both unsure how to move forward.
More time coordinates!

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they found themselves thrust into another life-or-death situation. More her than Clark.
What she gets for dating Clark and Superman wink

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“Looks like you’ll have to wait and be surprised,” Clark commented with a shrug. She let out a heavy harrumph as he walked back to his desk,
That’s mean, yanking Lois’s chain like that for their first date laugh

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The mystery of the unknown messenger was eating at her and had perked her interest just enough to guarantee she would, of course, investigate. It was in her nature.
Oh, he’s dangling an irresistible lure in front of her so she will show up to their date. That’s…Machiavellian! And yet, he fell for Lex’s traps. He really should apply himself more in his job the way he does in his love life.

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‘Follow the light.’
She picks up a card that could be coated in curare or some other contact poison and now that card reads ‘follow the light’s as in ‘go into the light seen at death’. Hmm…

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transformed into a candlelit walkway, guiding her on the secluded path to a single table with a linen cloth and a single-stemmed rose in a glass vase upon it.
Great. Another criminal mastermind stalker.

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She had spent the last several hours wracking her brain, wondering if the mysterious messenger was a threat or friend.
LOIS'S HEART: shock peep

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“I suppose I should put away the pepper spray?”
Well, he had a light touch with the seasoning…

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, “Unless the food is severely under spiced.”
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You see, I gave you that phone.”
shock

And we end on the most unexpected revelation. Adorable story!

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