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Top Banana
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Woo hoo! New chapter! And another cliff-hanger! GAH. Looking forward to more. 
"You take turns, advise and protect one another, even heal or be healed when the going gets too tough. I know! That's not a game--that's friendship!" ~Shelly Mezzanoble, Confessions of a Part-Time Sorceress: A Girl's Guide to the Dungeons & Dragons Game Darcy\'s Place
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Pulitzer
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Too short by far, Dandello, but still good. Keep it up!
Life isn't a support system for writing. It's the other way around.
- Stephen King, from On Writing
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Pulitzer
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Pulitzer
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Hi, Great part! 
Maria D. Ferdez.
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Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age.
MAF
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Merriwether
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The assassin was dead in the river. The unidentified Kryptonian was dead on the living room carpet of the Kent house, the police were at the door and Superman was unconscious on the sofa. That pretty well summed up the evening for Wanda. It’d be a great story, if anyone would believe it. Great opening line. “Lois, since this house is technically part of New Krypton, it really isn’t in our jurisdiction." Interesting. Nice chapter!
lisa in the sky with diamonds
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Pulitzer
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Pulitzer
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Too short! Want more...
PJ
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