Here you go!
Wonderful story. I'm anxious to see what the villains will do to Clark. I really like angst-driven stories.
Lois ran over to the man. He seemed familiar. Dark haired, broad-shouldered. Kal-El? She touched his shoulder and he shuddered as she moved to look at his face – it was Clark. He’d lost his glasses, there was a strange necklace around his neck, his face was bruised and swollen, and there was blood on his face, but he was definitely her missing partner, Clark Kent.
Interesting twist that she recognizes Clark instead of Superman. It might have been part of the challenge, I don't remeber much of it. Should go back to the thread, maybe.
“You’ve been missing about forty-eight hours,” she explained quietly. “And the FBI believes Superman was kidnapped or captured. They’re afraid he may be dead. We figure you went looking for him and got into trouble.”
Isn't that supposed to be Lois part in the story?
“Look Cl . . .”
“Kal-El,” he interrupted, keeping his voice low. “That’s who they think I am.”
Clarks advises Lois to call him Kal-El rather than Clark. Weird things are happening if the situation is like this.
“What have they done to you?” she asked again. He started shaking again and she realized he was crying.
Poor Clark!!!!!!
I'm almost gasping in pain myself here. Keep on writing and hunt the bad guys down please!!!!
Please!!!!! Please!!!!!
Let Clark live, will you?