“No!” The denial was so immediate, so broken, so disbelieving that for a minute Superman seriously wondered if he’d hallucinated Lois being in on the Secret. But her perfume still danced in the air and the coffee still sat, cold and untouched, on the counter, and she had always been a good actress, able to twist him around her little finger at her slightest whim.
Vicki posted:
That paragraph in particular was just so sad - especially since it begins in a way which *should* have given Clark hope.
Another great part--I loved the line 'But her perfume still danced in the air and the coffee still sat, cold and untouched, on the counter, and she had always been such a good actress, able to twist him around her little finger at her slightest whim.' Just so beautifully written
. And so descriptive--the perfume, the coffee. The words really paint a picture of the scene...
Thanks for the compliment, Vicki
...and you are so right--AntiK,you are a darn good writer
. It is very hard to walk away from this story btw postings.
So....
Might as well beg again:
Please?
Pretty please? Please post soon...
Laura
