Well, I just got into Florida a little while ago, and decided to stop in and see what was happening here. I'll respond to comments and such later, but there was one thing in particular which I wanted to address:
Luthor's death is interesting, of course. But it is premature to give suggestions for Lois regarding this, since the story leaves off before Lois even finds out he's dead. Hopefully, when she learns the news, she will ask questions and try to find out all she can about the circumstances of both his escape from prison and his death.
Lois does know. She got a call from Henderson that they'd found a body, and it would be all over the news. Cut to Clark, and he hears a news story about Lex's body having been found. I thought it would be more fun to leave you wondering "whose body?" for a few paragraphs, but I was hoping it would be clear that the call was about Lex. Do I need to fix that?
I've been thinking of editing the last part from Lois's POV anyway, to make it clearer that it picks up a few hours after the call. She's still shocked, but it's been a while. I'll see if I can find a better way to phrase that bit, and maybe add in something to make it clearer that Henderson's call was about Lex.
Paul
