Paul
WOW! An excellent part!
I think that Lois should leave the hospital at the moment. Maybe on her way out she could listen for any names particularly the doctor on duty. Jimmy and her need to return when different staff are on, so she won’t be remembered. This time she needs to be prepared to break in to the S. Rogers Memorial Wing. It’s the only way she’ll find out exactly what is going on there.
Bob Maxwell definitely needs checking out. What is his motive for emailing Lois? Why is he suddenly working for CostMart? Is he investigating Mindy Church? Will he reply to Lois’s email? Maybe Lois could have Jimmy follow Bob. Find out what he’s up to.
I’m glad that Lois phoned Martha and Jonathan. Lois’s babble about Clark is excellent. Her concern is well portrayed.
I’m thoroughly enjoying this and look forward to reading the next part.
Tricia
