Sara, a cute, interesting story.
Do you know what really would have been cool. If you had made this a TOGoM story. That would have been really... (What? It is a TOGoM story?). Nevermind.
Nice twist.
But you've gone against the new tradition I tried to start. Instead of all these stories being written for someone when it's their birthday, it's supposed to be the other way around. If it's Wendy's birthday coming up, then WENDY should be writing a story for the rest of us. It's much easier to keep track of things that way.
Anyway, it was a nice, original take on the most utilized premise in Lois and Clark ficdom.
Tank (who thinks Wendy should write a story for the gentle readers for her birthday anyway)
