Hmm... interesting, Lynn. Also slow-moving <g> And I have no earthly idea where you're taking this story, which is somewhat unusual. On the one hand, it seems so bizarre to me that Superman would ground himself to spend weeks in one village... but then, it's not so different from what he did before settling down in Metropolis, I imagine. At least now he has the freedom to use his powers -- however ineffective they are <g>
And I laughed out loud on the line that now in his dreams, Lois sometimes yelled at him in Spanish <g>
Post more, please... oh, and I know you won't get as much feedback over here as you do on the nfic side, but that doesn't mean no one's reading it

I appreciate you taking the time to post it both places.
PJ