Paul, good instalment. Lot's of stuff,information wise going on.
Lois needs to be a bit more 'involved' and that might mean an exploration of that warehouse.
Also, I think you need to add a note explaning why Lois is keeping the police so informed as to her actions. That is not like her, especially admitting to illegal breaking and entering. It must be her desparation over Clark.
Which brings us to Lois and Clark. I think it's time that Lois' panic over what might have happened, or is happening to him. It's been days now, and he could be... Dead! I think it's time Lois had some serious bouts of worry.
Going well.
Tank (who is glad that there is at least still something being posted during this time)
