Um... what Roger and Yvette said.
Interesting premise and off to an intriguing start.
One minor possible nit-pick: who are the "Ma" and "Pa" that Clark thinks about -- and whose pie he is looking forward to in Smallville? If this is the original AU as seen in TA, it can't be the Kents because they are dead; is it the Langs? I could see Lana's parents wanting him to call them that when he was engaged to her. Or is it someone else -- someone important to him from the post-Kent/pre-Lois era? Just curious...
More, please, at your earliest convenience.
Phil
