First of all, sorry I didn't get my feedback up from the last part. I'm really enjoying this story. I like the ease that I have in reading the AU aspects in it.
I like the accuracy in the political struggles in the Republic of Congo. Although I don't have a political science background in that particular part of the world, I can appreciate the time and effort that you put into finding the information that you used in the story.
The other thing I liked was the 'reintroducing' of the characters from the AU Lois and Clark. It gives the reader the impressions of both characters through the description, and their on screen words.
I too get the impression that that 'warning' message held more validity than what we currently are aware of. Please post the next part soon, it's very enjoyable.
Yvette
