I liked this very much, Gerry. The scene where Lois almost fell through the floor was particularly well done - liked Clark levitating to pull her back up, and I especially liked the way she clung to him afterwards. Aww!
The conversation about Clark, Superman and Luthor was good, too. I hear what Roger's saying about Clark's warnings prior to the abortive wedding, but I think a lot of this is simply missed signals and misunderstanding. Yes, Clark did try to tell Lois more than just to watch out for Luthor, but by the time he did that she wasn't actually listening to what he was saying. All she was hearing was jealousy on his part. Sometimes we don't always hear what the other person is saying to us; we hear what we think they're saying. Anyway, I think that's easily fixed by having Clark point out that he did say more than Lois acknowledges, but that neither of them was really listening to the other by then.
Looking forward to more!!
Wendy
