Okay, this was a typical Wendy effort. Well written, good introspection and exploration of our duo's complex and conflicting feelings.
Still it is a BaTP/HoL setting which makes it that much more difficult to deal with. How does one explain the inexplainable. There just is no way that the Lois presented all during the first season would have ever have excepted Lex's proposal.
I'm curious as to what Lois means by her plantive cry of "I never intended to marry him". It's going to be a tough sell, but probably fun.
Tank (who could make a suggestion to Wendy as to how she could really make this fic better, but realizes that the story is probably already finished)
