Thank you!
I know it's evil, and it isn't Red-K, Pam, just to ease your fears. I couldn't ever have my Clark act like a jerk towards Lois - there's no way she'd get past that, given her trauma.
I will TRY to get the next part in post shape by sunday. But I was a bad bad bad person today and didn't do things I was supposed to do in order to write this stuff up, so I need to focus on those other things.
I do have a meaty chapter mostly written though, so I live in hope.
