Nicely wrapped, Paul.
I have to compliment you on your Lois. She was very, well... Lois.
Her thought processes were fun to watch unfold, and, of course, her brillance to finally come up with the solution, and the rescue was pure Lois.
Now that we know you can write long stories, I guess that means your next effort is going to have to be of epic length?
Tank (who wishes to point out that all this wonderful Lois action was carried out by the superior, 'short-haired' Lois)
