Sorry I'm so late with comments. Heck, I seem to be late with everything these days, thanks to RL, and when he's a pain in the butt, I even use the *other* RL to help me with my homework.. Thanks, Roger
Anyway, to the point: I cannot *believe* your ability to combine words, sentence struncture and just sheer brilliance into a fic as short as this. It's...poetic. Yup, that's the word. And so much more. Whatever the theme is, the plot, the mood, you have this unique ability to make everything sound so much...*more*. And that's what makes a great story
Did I mention that I just love this?!
Pelican
