What a story this is! I'm spellbound. I can't beleive you're just in the process of writing it. I can't imagine having to wait to read the next part. This is definately the best one of all the fanfic i've been reading!

I love their personalities. I love the changes. When i write more lcfanfic i want to use these characters! I love the easy going nature they've both got now. It's so much better than the anger they had so much of the time!

I love the way you write, the way you draw me in, the way you paint the setting, show me where they are, what they're feeling. It's so peaceful there on the ocean.

I'll bet you have to take more than a few minutes to write the next part, so i guess i'm not going to find it on here this morning. Darn darn darn. I'll just have to go get a life for as long as it takes you.

Nancy
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It's always such an embarrassment. Having to do away with someone. It's like announcing to the world that you lack the savvy and the finesse to deal with the problem more creatively. I mean, there have been times, naturally, when I've had to have people eliminated, but it's always saddened me. I've always felt like I've let myself down somehow.